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Sparrow Song

By Geoffrey Philp Published about a year ago 1 min read

The December breeze

ruffles the sparrow’s feathers--

gray hairs on my head.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Geoffrey Philp

I am a Jamaican writer. I write poems (haiku & haibun), stories & essays about climate change, Marcus Garvey, music icons such as Bob Marley, and the craft of writing through personal reflection & societal engagement.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Ward Norcuttabout a year ago

    This is gentling imagery..nice. I really thought some amazing blue haikus were completely missed...and some odd choices for lifting up... I like your voice and will follow

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