The December breeze
ruffles the sparrow’s feathers--
gray hairs on my head.
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Geoffrey Philp
I am a Jamaican writer. I write poems (haiku & haibun), stories & essays about climate change, Marcus Garvey, music icons such as Bob Marley, and the craft of writing through personal reflection & societal engagement.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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This is gentling imagery..nice. I really thought some amazing blue haikus were completely missed...and some odd choices for lifting up... I like your voice and will follow