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Adrift

for Prompted #5

By Matthew FrommPublished 29 days ago 1 min read
Adrift
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Adrift in paradise

A clipper with slack canvas

Sailors lazing along upon dead seas

As their captain eyes the horizon

Time ticks

Then tocks

As clouds pass

The captain sighs

They must sail

Navigating strange tides

Charting unknown shores

The company must profit

Or else they die

Hyperbolic? Maybe

But...

No breeze means no journey

No journey means no pay

No pay means no food

So he watches his compass

And ponders the stars

Waiting

Waiting

Hoping the salty sea

Ushers forth deliverance

Praying

Praying

Dusk settles

He awakes

Not to squalls

But to firm tranquil seas

Adrift in paradise

The captain curses

The absence of industry

As Poseidon laughs

In the face of

His futility

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A/N:

For Randy's Prompted #5. Words used: Sea, Compass , Tranquil, Dead, Canvas, Breeze, Navigating, Horizon, stars, Clouds, Unknown, Time, Salty

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Comments (10)

  • Lamar Wiggins11 days ago

    ‘No breeze equals no pay’ It’s amazing how something as simple as a breeze is very crucial to a process. Nice entry, Matt!

  • M. A. Mehan 28 days ago

    Big POTC vibes here, love it!!

  • This was so soothing to read…though not so soothing for those trapped on the becalmed sea.😵‍💫 I really like the repetition: waiting, waiting… praying, praying.✅

  • Heather Zieffle 28 days ago

    Wonderful poem!! Great entry to the challenge.

  • Shaun Walters28 days ago

    A well thought out, complete narrative

  • angela hepworth28 days ago

    Beautiful contribution to the challenge!

  • Sherif Saad28 days ago

    Amazing!

  • Very, very nicely done Matt 🌟👌

  • Carol Townend29 days ago

    I love the great imagery and the brilliant play on words.

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