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Absurd Beliefs

From Here to the Edge of the Cosmos

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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Absurd Beliefs
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Some — many — believe that we live again, yet we

only live once before our body burns or rots

but it’s never enough to only live once, free

or not, although freedom is an illusion, thoughts

of grandeur meandering in the brain like stars

Why am I here, where am I going, who the fuck

am I? and more useless questions, including Mars

I mean Ares, the original Greek name, schmuck

whoever you are, even Greek, English-speaking

or some other famous language, because they died

and their tongue with them, the funeral was reeking

of despair, at least of the soulless Cosmos, wide

as nothing else knowable in this existence

filled with insistence, inconsistence and distance.

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Absurdity advancing to a beat

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 months ago

    Oooo, this was so profound and thought provoking! Loved your poem!

  • Christy Munson2 months ago

    Liked this one a lot. The structure of a sonnet (10 syllables per line) get stretched in places, but I'm okay with that. Really loved hearing about Disney's, "The Lone Ranger". Hadn't heard that was in the works. Thanks also for including the link to that perfectly titled music. "Absurdity Advancing..." for sure!

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