Fans with shining wings,
Who's edge is full of dust.
In corners, Show-piece things
Are only to see in a glance,
If stare then on it dust,
Will come in appearance.
.
Flowers looking realistic,
After touching feels plastic.
.
Paintings, art and frame on wall,
No doubt, all is in wonder.
Not suitable for house owner.
.
light in the whole room,
That bright light, after landing,
Most of the dust is visible on it
in the sunlight from outside.
.
"I keep the house very clear" Said owner.
So I took note of everything.
About the Creator
Manthan
loving, living, chilling, relaxing, enjoying life,.... I am full crazy and bizarre 😍🥰😜😝. I read and write poems - poetry. And in rest of time I 🤔🙄🤭🤫🥱.
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In The Blink of Her Eye
Time itself bent and morphed, allowing Shannon the precious seconds needed to see and adjust to the disaster unfolding in front of her. Each frame showed minute details she would have missed had the clock not slowed down until she heard every click of the hands as they swept toward the end of everything. If only she was being melodramatic...
By Lisa VanGalen3 days ago in Fiction
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I loved this poem!