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About this house.....

by Manthan 6 months ago in surreal poetry
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what seems and what is, to know it will take time...

Fans with shining wings,

Who's edge is full of dust.

In corners, Show-piece things

Are only to see in a glance,

If stare then on it dust,

Will come in appearance.

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Flowers looking realistic,

After touching feels plastic.

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Paintings, art and frame on wall,

No doubt, all is in wonder.

Not suitable for house owner.

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light in the whole room,

That bright light, after landing,

Most of the dust is visible on it

in the sunlight from outside.

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"I keep the house very clear" Said owner.

So I took note of everything.

surreal poetry

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Manthan

loving, living, chilling, relaxing, enjoying life,.... I am full crazy and bizarre 😍🥰😜😝. I read and write poems - poetry. And in rest of time I 🤔🙄🤭🤫🥱.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran6 months ago

    I loved this poem!

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