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out then in

By JPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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artist unknown

Ever unfolding

prophetic compact: mirrored

casket hinging shut.

Haiku
5

About the Creator

J

I will not say: do not weep; for not all tears are an evil

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  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    The smallest things are usually the biggest. I love that image: “ever unfolding…compact.” The title is awesome. So clever. And I love how you said “compact: mirrored” to specify compact as a noun (a small folded makeup mirror) and bring that metaphor of unfolding full circle. A prophetic compact, too, is such a rich image, a small mirror ceaselessly growing, duplicating, reflecting the reality of what we learn in the final line to be death. Yet the image depicts fetal creatures inside oyster shells. So is this a critique on something very specific, the deaths fetuses? That they’re in oyster shells implies they’re going to be eaten and quite possibly by rich people…are we seeing a perspective of fetal sacrifice to an elite? Is the haiku bringing to light this reality while commentating on how such small deaths grow into massive calamities? I don’t know. However I love thinking about it all. Wherever did you find this art piece? It’s so strange yet very powerful. I can see why it inspired you. Absolutely smashing work!

  • Phil Flannery2 months ago

    That's some creepy pic.

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