A Young Man With Tiny Wings
Gullible girl, flirting with fire
Everyone in the town was receiving angels at their doors,
Inviting them in,
And receiving miracles in return
One showed up to my door,
Naked, young, almost handsome, though dirty
Like many others, but this one had a funny tattoo
On the bottom of his foot
Fire, blazing bright, in blue ink like all human tattoos
Well he was naked so I clothed him
And he was hungry so I fed him
Also he was thirsty so I gave him to drink
I had done my duty.
He smiled, thanked me kindly for my goodness,
And he pecked my cheek and walked out, I blushed
Nothing but misfortune fell upon me for the rest of my life.
Bills, endless bills, black mold in all the vents,
Rot in the drains, mother passed away
Father took himself out, brother locked up
Sisters all went insane
One miscarriage, then another, and a stillbirth
All three had names: Eliza, Mary, and Jax
The neighbors spied in on the fights
Until he left me. Then they stopped
Pretending to care that I was suffering.
After that, I prayed for the first time in years
To no avail, God doesn't hear the prayers
Of those who allowed themselves
To be so easily enchanted by the Devil.
About the Creator
Emily Dickerson
Hopeful and young, full of love. From my heart high praises are sung. For this reason I am here: to love and serve and bring all souls near. <3
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That twist at the end got me! So good