Thank you to Mike Singleton for kicking this starter sentence for this Vocal Social Society challenge and Vocal Villanelle Challenge.
Here it goes:
Tell me your stories, Your magic is mine.
Botanical pleasures observing birds in nature’s ballet.
It’s a life of freedom that is so heavenly divine.
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Tingles of pleasures fly down my spine.
My song bird’s melodies keep stress’s away.
Tell me your stories, Your magic is mine.
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Flashes of glitter from delicate wings so fine.
Air that is so lively with botanical play.
It’s a life of freedom that is so heavenly divine.
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Tell me your stories, Your magic is mine.
An oasis that is filled with tropical floral bouquet.
Tell me your stories, Your magic is mine.
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A peacefulness that taste like the finest wine.
There is just one rule for you to be able to stay.
It’s a life of freedom that is so heavenly divine.
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Leave your troubles far away.
If you don’t, this world will be nothing but your troubling shrine.
Tell me your stories, Your magic is mine.
It’s a life of freedom that is so heavenly divine.
About the Creator
Daphsam
Loving Wife, Mom, Dog Mom- A Dyslexic dreamer who never thought I could read or write. But life changed, and I conquered my fears. I am an artist, photographer, wordsmith and illustrator. Looking to weave stories and poems with my artwork.
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
The Whiskered War
A domestic drama; rather, you're witnessing a millennium-old conflict over the fate of the entire planet (and possibly just a smA titanic struggle between wits and strength has been raging in the shadows for millennia: The Great Nibble vs. The Purrsecution. The cats, the furry fighters, the fascists of the feline world, occupy one corner. In the other, mice make up the squeaky squad, the small militia. The reward? Domination over the entire world (and possibly an especially tasty cheese wheel).
By Richard Weber4 days ago in Humor
Comments (3)
Gosh this was so positive, uplifting and magical! Loved your take on this challenge!
Thank you for this and an excellent entry
This is to me somewhat inspirational in a way.