A Villanelle: I Grieve before the Daytime turns to Dusk
For The Road Drops Here Challenge

I grieve before the daytime turns to dusk
My supple skin goes deep within mind sight
Detach from me you veiled scars of aging
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Trees of features fall away in season
dip down and cry a song to heavens sky
I grieve before the daytime turns to dusk
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Songs were sung our voices melded singing
How man can’t crush the clock of hidden sin
Detach from me you veiled scars of aging
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My day will come like yours have done in vain
Life of sin, dust from scripture breathing in
I grieve before the daytime turns to dusk
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I lie in wait the days pass by with grace
When Christ- mas comes we all will smile again
Detach from me you veiled scars of aging
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The beat of my heart stop, escape, lub dub
stone cold face, eyes closed, leaving the world here
I grieve before the daytime turns to dusk
Detach from me you veiled scars of aging.
A/N : Inspired by two good friends of ours. I thought they were going to die. Both ill. Both didn’t show up. But yesterday they did and it made my heart sing. It made me happy enough to complete this poem. It’s first state was ugly. Needed lots of edits. Thank you if you got this far. Please press that hollow heart, hit subscribe and comment down below, because I was afraid to write another Villanelle incase it wasn’t as good as my first one. A Villanelle to Palo Santo. But who cares. Thank you so much once again 🤗♥️🙏🏽
About the Creator
Caitlin Charlton
Writer first. Close reader and self‑taught critic shaping eloquence.
A survivor reclaiming her territory.
I write dark fiction and poetry through symbol, shadow, and fracture.
Always sharpening the craft. ✏️🔥👠
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