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A Murder of Intrusive Thoughts

Poem for the March Madness Write Club Prompt

By Leslie WritesPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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I think in crooked pictures

I speak in mangled words

My mind is like an ugly nest of birds

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They squawk when they’re angry

They crow when they’re scared

And in their chaos I’m ensnared

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They don’t respond to reason

They can’t discern a fact

It’s by primitive instincts they react

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I may ignore their antics

I might placate them with drugs

Yet they brood like filthy wigged bugs

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Some may fly away

But soon they’ll come back here

No therapy will make them disappear

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I never get a moment's rest

With these thoughts that fly around

I suppose I’ll do their bidding on the ground

surreal poetryMental HealthFree Verse
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About the Creator

Leslie Writes

Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.

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  • Anna 2 months ago

    Wow! Great take on the challenge! Well done!😊

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Apt description of maddening thoughts. They can be relentless. Interesting thoughts about thoughts.

  • This was AWESOME! The picture, the prose, everything.

  • Great job, Leslie!

  • I can relate to this for sure, Leslie! It is like a Hitchcock movie of psychotic birds in my head! I love the format. Every line is perfectly crafted. Well done!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    Ugly nest of birds- so much!

  • Iris Harris3 months ago

    Beware of those flying thoughts! Well done! Keep it up!

  • Omgggg, this was so relatable! Loved both your poem and cover pic!

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Nailed it!!! Bravo, Leslie!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Melissa Ingoldsby3 months ago

    Extremely clever title and very raw piece!

  • Can you hear them, too? Beware their bidding.

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Oooo! A lot of interesting lines throughout. Disturbing, yet palpable. Probably why I enjoyed it, lol.

  • Donna Renee3 months ago

    Ahhhhhhhhh yep. Totally relate. Love the way you nailed these thoughts! That image too is just spot on 😩🫠

  • Grz Colm3 months ago

    Sounds like my brain. Very apt and relatable Leslie! ☺️👏 A non caring, matter of fact, comical approach is best to ease these I’ve found. Good luck!

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