A man so rare
One of a kind, a man so fine. Defying the test of time
You built a time machine
Sped through the barriers of time
Travelled faster than the speed of sound
Defied the speed of light
Traversed the spectrums of the stars
You flew between the raindrops
Creating prisms of lights so magnificent
I closed my eyes in heavenly exhilaration
Danger stalked and threatened your every step
Still you mastered every daunting brute
Who dared to cross your charted path
Through predicaments and aberrations
There were far too many, you kept on
Still you parried in determination
Through swordfights in the 18th Century
Wars in the 19th, rebellion in the 20th
When first, we met in passionate dreams
Our souls bound by quantum entanglement
Joined as one across multiple universes
Our souls collided that bright moonlit night
We each knew those entangled particles of ourselves
Had interacted, and shared a spatial proximity so magical
The quantum state of each particle of our souls
Could not be described independently of the state of the other
Even though the particles be separated by worlds, distance or time
And so I waited for you
I waited patiently with bated breath for Centuries
You slayed dragons for me
Dreamed me roses myriad in their abundance
Passion ignited those roses into diverse colors and shades
You walked on water in your haste to embrace me
Realizing not, a miracle you performed
Then finally, our fates collided
Your eyes saw through my insecurities
Tossed them into the wind swept air
Your loving arms encircled me
And moved the stubborn mountains
I brushed away the centuries old cobwebs
From you sword and lance, and cleaned your
Muddied boots
I had made a home ready for you
Drew you a hot, soothing lilac and daffodil scented bath
I gently washed away the weary knots, stress and strain
Of a journey well met and reciprocated
You placed a galaxy upon my finger
Wonderous lights from it shone
We laid ourselves down
Fell asleep in clouds of joyful anticipation
Such a rare and gallant specimen of a man
Of whom there can be no other
You fought for me with all your heart
Valiant knight, heart of fair lady won!
Chapter one Fini! Life now begins, Commencer! Entamer! Ah the romance of the French language.
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This was compelling and rhythmic, it made me go back in time and remember when I first fell in love with my husband. He insight feelings that I've only ever read about and only hoped to feel. Thank you for reminding me of the feeling of new love and the excitement that it brings.