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A Hidden Path

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By Christian BassPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
A Hidden Path
Photo by nikko macaspac on Unsplash

It’s nice to be nice, it ain’t nice to be too nice

A wise man once told me about this Irish phrase

A hidden path to find my inner paradise

Without it, I could lose my soul without a trace

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A wise man once told me about this Irish phrase

To guide me back, to accept my very own way

Without it, I could lose my soul without a trace

Yet the understanding came with a huge delay

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To guide me back, to accept my very own way

First love yourself, then send out the love you feel

Yet, the understanding came with a huge delay

Just to accept this truth will always be real

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First love yourself, then send out the love you feel

A hidden path to find my inner paradise

Just to accept this truth will always be real:

It’s nice to be nice, it ain’t nice to be too nice.

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Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Christian Bass

An author, who writes tales of human encounters with nature and wildlife. I dive into the depths of the human psyche, offering an insights into our connection with the world around us, inviting us on a journeys.

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  • Test4 months ago

    Well done!

Christian BassWritten by Christian Bass

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