A French Meal
A complaint I have heard is too expensive and not enough food.
The virelai is a French poetic form with alternating rhymes and line lengths. Here are basic guidelines: + nine lines per stanza, + lines one, two, four, five, seven, and eight have five syllables
+ lines three, six, and nine have two syllables
+ the five-syllable lines rhyme with each other and the two-syllable lines rhyme with each other to make the following rhyme pattern: aabaabaab
+ the end rhyme for the short lines continues on in the following stanza
+ the final stanza’s short-line end rhyme should be the same as the long-line end rhyme in the opening stanza (to complete the end-rhyme circle)
Note on stanzas: This form can contain as few as two stanzas to infinity (if you could write that many). Writer’s Digest, by Robert Lee Brewer
Here’s my attempt at a virelai:
French meal
What a deal, this meal
I enjoy the deal
Oh no
it is a real steal
That is what I feel
I know
you will surely squeal
as I stop to heal
That’s so
~
Let us place a bow
tie on your best beaux
French food
a fabulous flow
a beautiful glow
a mood
Who eats with this show?
My man and I go
and wooed.
~
The best coffee brewed.
I feel like I’m glued
to eel
it is gratitude
for my attitude
this meal
as it does conclude
sir, no platitude
great deal
~
FRENCH POETIC FORM
~~~~~~~~~
First published by Mercury Press on medium.com
About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
Retired, working part-time as a Native American culture consultant. I have an MSE, and an ABD. I write on Vocal, and Facebook. Poetry, non-fiction mostly, and working on fiction. Wife, mother, grandmother, and great grandmother.
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