A Broken Hearted Boy 💔
You can Still Face the works although living with a Broken Heart the world sees the Greatness you put out💯
Broken Hearted Boy‼️
He whispers to not shout-
Sits, to not stand-
Loves, to not hate-
Smiles, to not cry-
Tries, to not quit-
You look at him
And see A Star ⭐️
But he’s Broken Hearted…
He teaches us to not be Dumb-
Push, to not be pulled-
muscles, to not be weak-
Spirited, to not be afraid-
Hold on, to not let go-
You look at him
And see A Warrior 👣
But he's Still
That Broken Hearted Boy💔
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Loved this! ❤️
An emotional read, and highly poetic as always.
It’s so hard when the outside and the inside are so different ❤️
Beautifully done. ❤️ It takes a lot of strength to keep shining. 💖💖💓💓
What others don't see because we refuse to wear it on our sleeve. (Or do see because we do.)
This was so sad but so true! We may only see what a person shows on the outside. Loved your poem!
Oh, he's still the broken-hearted boy? Great work dear.
Very nice
He may be broken hearted, but he shines like a star and stands tall like a warrior. Truly inspiring!!! 👏💕🥰
Great job! Huge congrats Lonzo on your recent leaderboard placement too!! 🥳👏
Lovely and loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Love it 😊 keep up the flower 🌺 flow
Phenomenal work! Very inspiring- just keep going 4 there is a rainbow with its pot of gold around the corner!
So inspiring and relatable. I love the message of not letting a broken heart consume you and change you or lead you to a dark place (depression) .
Aww I love this one!! So relatable!
To be broken hearted means you fought and dared - you cannot be a warrior without those two things. I would rather be the warrior with a (healing) broken heart than the alternative- great poem!
Warriors , duties is never done. I hope this warrior experience true love so he will never feel broken hearted again 🙏🏽❤️
I love how this talks about a broken heart without losing a sense of who we are in the process. 'I'm still a warrior.' 💖
We often don't see past the exterior. Very well expressed, Lonzo!
Spirited to not be afraid... Such beautiful work.