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10 Miles to October

A Journey Through the Season of Memory

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 2 days ago 2 min read
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I went to October by way of the mountain,
taking the road I used to take as a boy,
though the road had changed since those days
and I had changed enough to notice.
The pasture had gone brown after the summer,
and the apples were dropping beneath the trees.

At the first bend I met an old man
who was carrying a bundle of kindling home,
and when I told him where I was going
he said October was farther on.
He pointed past the barn and up the hill,
then went his way as though he had said enough.

I followed the road until I came
to a field with pumpkins left after picking,
some split open by the weather,
some still waiting for the frost to take them.
A blackbird rose from the weeds beside me
and crossed the field toward the mountain.

Beyond the field stood a house
with a lantern hanging beside the steps,
and a woman was sweeping the boards clean
though the wind kept bringing leaves back.
She watched me come along the road
and said I had better keep moving before dark.

I asked how far October might be,
and she pointed toward the woods.
There was a road through them
I had never seen from the valley,
and I took it because I had come that far
and because the day was getting short.

The road climbed until I could see
the farms spread below the mountain,
their fields dark beneath the evening,
their chimneys sending smoke into the cold.
Then I came upon a second house,
smaller than the first and set back from the road.

A man stood beside it splitting wood,
and I knew him before he looked up.
He was my father as I remembered him
when I was young enough to follow him anywhere.
He set the axe against the shed
and told me I was late.

I asked what I was late for,
and he said October had been waiting.
Then he went inside, leaving me there
with the mountain standing behind me
and the road ahead growing darker.
I followed him because the season had opened a way
and I had spent half my life trying to find it.

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Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

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    Written by Tim Carmichael