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The Woodcutter’s Gift

A short story

By Nazril FadhilahPublished 2 years ago • 5 min read

The morning mist clung to the hills as if reluctant to release its hold on the world. The village of Hollowgrove lay nestled among towering pines, where life was simple, though not always kind.

It was a place where people lived their lives by the rhythm of the forest, gathering timber, hunting game, and trading stories over fires each night. But in every village, there is always someone who doesn't quite belong.

Beneath the trees, where the sun rarely touched, lived a man named Torben. He was the village woodcutter, but unlike others who enjoyed the warmth of company and laughter, Torben was shunned. His face was as gnarled as the roots of the trees he felled.

His brow heavy, his jaw crooked, and his eyes sunken into his face like dark pits. Children ran when they saw him, mothers whispered warnings to stay away, and men glanced at him with disdain.

“He’s cursed,” the villagers would mutter when his hulking figure trudged through the marketplace to sell wood. His clothes were roughspun and dirty, and his hands calloused from years of swinging his axe.

But the truth was, no one had ever taken the time to speak to him long enough to know what Torben truly was.

One crisp autumn morning, when the sun began to chase away the fog, young Elara ventured deep into the forest. She had always been drawn to the woods, enchanted by the stories her grandmother told her—about hidden treasures, ancient magic, and creatures unseen by most.

She was searching for a rare plant, the moonleaf, known for its healing properties.

Her mother had fallen ill, and no remedy in the village seemed to work. The herbalist had mentioned that the plant only grew in the depths of the forest, near the old stone circle where few dared to tread.

The trees soon grew thicker, their branches tangled like the fingers of giants. The path became hard to follow, and before long, Elara realized she was lost. The air around her grew still, and the light dimmed as the canopy overhead blotted out the sky.

Panic started to rise in her chest. She spun around, trying to retrace her steps, but every tree looked the same. She had wandered far beyond familiar territory.

Just as her hope began to wane, she heard a sound—a rhythmic thud in the distance. It was faint but unmistakable: the sound of an axe striking wood.

With a gulp, Elara headed towards the sound. The villagers had always told her to avoid the woodcutter, but right now, he was her only chance of finding a way out.

She pushed through the underbrush until she came upon a clearing. There, in the center, stood Torben, his broad back turned to her as he swung his axe in slow, powerful strokes.

For a moment, she hesitated. The stories about him filled her mind—cursed, dangerous, a monster among men. But before she could slip away unnoticed, a twig snapped beneath her foot. Torben froze mid-swing, turning his head slightly.

"Who’s there?" His voice was deep, almost like the rumble of distant thunder.

Elara stepped out from the shadows, her heart pounding. "I... I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to disturb you."

Torben turned fully now, lowering his axe to his side. His face, worn and rugged, seemed even more intimidating up close. But his eyes, dark though they were, held no malice.

"You’re not disturbing me," he said, his tone gentler than she expected. "What are you doing out here, so far from the village?"

Elara wrung her hands, unsure how to answer. "I... I’m looking for moonleaf. My mother... she’s sick."

Torben nodded, as if he understood more than she had said. "Moonleaf grows near the old stone circle," he rumbled. "That’s dangerous land."

"I know, but I need to find it," Elara replied, her voice firm despite her fear. "The herbalist said it’s the only thing that can help her."

For a moment, there was silence between them. Torben studied her face, then the forest around them, as if weighing a decision. Finally, he spoke again.

"I’ll take you there."

Elara blinked in surprise. "You... you will?"

Torben’s lips twitched, almost into a smile. "I know these woods better than anyone. You’ll get lost on your own."

Without waiting for her to agree, Torben turned and began walking, his axe still slung over his shoulder.

Elara hesitated only a moment before following, her steps quick to keep up with his long strides.

The forest grew darker and more twisted the deeper they ventured. The trees here were ancient, their bark knotted and their roots rising like the backs of great serpents.

Elara kept close to Torben, who moved with ease, as if the labyrinth of trees was second nature to him.

"Why do the villagers hate you?" Elara asked after a long stretch of silence.

Torben’s steps faltered for a heartbeat, but he kept walking. "They think I’m cursed," he said simply.

"Are you?" she pressed, her curiosity getting the better of her.

Torben chuckled softly, a sound that was more sad than amused. "No. Just different. People fear what they don’t understand."

Elara frowned. "That doesn’t seem fair."

Torben glanced over his shoulder at her. "Life isn’t fair, girl. But you don’t have to be like them."

Elara considered this as they walked, her opinion of the woodcutter shifting with every step. He wasn’t the monster she had been told he was. In fact, he seemed kinder and wiser than most of the villagers she knew.

They soon arrived at the stone circle, an eerie place where moss-covered boulders stood in a perfect ring.

The air was colder here, and the shadows seemed to move on their own. In the center of the circle grew the moonleaf, its silver-edged leaves shimmering faintly.

"There it is," Torben said, nodding toward the plant.

Elara moved quickly, kneeling down to gather the leaves. As she worked, she felt a sense of unease wash over her. The place felt… wrong, as if they weren’t alone.

Suddenly, the ground trembled. Elara gasped, dropping the moonleaf. A low growl echoed from the shadows between the stones. Torben stepped in front of her, his hand tightening on the axe handle.

A creature emerged from the darkness—a massive wolf, its eyes glowing with unnatural light. It circled them, its growl low and menacing.

Elara’s heart pounded in her chest. "What is that?" she whispered.

"An old guardian," Torben said, his voice calm but firm. "It protects this place."

The wolf lunged. Torben moved faster than Elara thought possible, raising his axe and bringing it down with a roar. The wolf yelped, retreating into the shadows as quickly as it had appeared.

For a moment, there was silence.

Torben lowered his axe, breathing hard. "Hurry. We need to leave."

Elara didn’t need to be told twice. She grabbed the moonleaf and followed Torben back through the forest, her heart racing the entire way.

By the time they returned to the village, the sun was setting. Elara clutched the moonleaf tightly as they approached her home. She turned to Torben, gratitude welling up inside her.

"Thank you," she said, her voice soft but sincere.

Torben nodded, his expression unreadable. "Take care of your mother."

As he turned to leave, Elara called after him. "Torben!"

He paused, glancing back.

"You’re not cursed," she said, meeting his gaze. "You’re just... misunderstood."

For the first time, Torben smiled—a small, sad smile. "Perhaps."

And with that, the woodcutter disappeared into the forest, leaving Elara with a new understanding of what it meant to be truly kind, even in a world that refused to see it.

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    Written by Nazril Fadhilah