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Eight Bottles and a Secret

For eight summer nights, someone left cold water outside Apartment 4B. Then, the ninth night brought a warning.

By Ajan Lori A. Published 2 months ago • 7 min read
Eight Bottles and a Secret
Photo by Grafix Naim on Unsplash

Every night at exactly 11:17, someone left a cold drink outside Apartment 4B. Nobody knew who was leaving them. Then one night, the drink disappeared.

At first, nobody thought much of it.

It was summer and people were tired and hot.

People do strange things when they are hot.

The first bottle appeared on a Tuesday night.

It was a small bottle of cold water which sat outside Apartment 4B.

It wasn't just cool.

It was cold.

There was condensation running down the sides.

The apartment belonged to Mrs. Sato, a seventy-two-year-old widow who lived alone and complained about almost everything except the weather.

She complained about noisy children, about people leaving bicycles in the wrong place, about the price of vegetables and even about the elevator taking too long.

But she never complained about the heat.

That was what made the bottle strange.

Mrs. Sato found it at 11:20 the next morning.

She picked it up.

Looked at it.

Then looked down the hallway but saw nothing and no one.

She knocked on her neighbor's door.

Mr. Watanabe opened it.

“Did you leave this?”

He looked at the bottle.

“No.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yes.”

“Maybe you forgot.”

“I did not forget.”

Mrs. Sato narrowed her eyes.

“People forget things.”

“I know.”

“You're getting older.”

“So are you.”

She stared at him.

He closed the door.

The second bottle appeared the next night.

Same brand, same size and the same time.

11:17 p.m.

This time, Mrs. Sato was awake.

She had been watching television when she heard the elevator.

Ding dong!

Footsteps.

Then silence.

She opened her door.

Nobody was there.

Only the bottle.

Cold water.

She picked it up.

Still no one.

The next morning, she called her daughter.

“Someone is leaving things outside my apartment.”

Her daughter paused.

“What things?”

“Water.”

“Water?”

“Yes.”

“Maybe someone is being kind.”

“Why would a stranger leave me water?”

“Because it's hot.”

“I have water.”

Her daughter laughed.

“Mom, maybe someone is worried about you.”

“I don't need strangers worrying about me.”

She hung up.

But she kept the bottle.

The third night, she waited.

At 11:00, she turned off the television.

At 11:10, she sat near the door.

At 11:15, she opened it slightly.

At 11:17, the elevator dinged.

Mrs. Sato held her breath.

Footsteps approached.

Slowly.

Then stopped.

She opened the door.

There was no one at the door but the bottle was there, cold as always.

She looked down the hallway.

The elevator doors were closing.

Someone was inside but she couldn't see their face.

“Wait!”

The elevator doors closed.

Mrs. Sato stood there in her slippers, holding the bottle.

She was furious.

She was also curious.

The next morning, the entire building knew.

Nobody knew exactly how.

But buildings have their own communication systems.

You don't need social media.

You just need one person who saw something and another person who enjoys gossip.

By lunchtime, the theories had begun.

Mr. Watanabe thought it was probably one of the younger residents.

“Maybe they have a crush on her.”

Mrs. Sato nearly dropped her tea.

“A crush?”

“You never know.”

“She is seventy-two.”

“So?”

She stared at him.

He shrugged.

“Love has no age.”

“Neither does stupidity.”

He smiled.

Someone else suggested it was the building manager.

Another person thought it might be a delivery worker.

One woman believed it was a ghost.

“Why would a ghost leave water?” someone asked.

“Maybe the ghost is thirsty.”

Nobody could answer that.

For the next week, the bottles continued.

Every night.

11:17.

Always cold.

Always outside Apartment 4B.

Mrs. Sato became obsessed.

She started checking the hallway every night.

She watched the elevator.

She listened for footsteps.

She even put a chair beside her door.

On Friday night, Mr. Watanabe found her sitting there.

“What are you doing?”

“Nothing.”

“You're sitting in a chair facing the door.”

“I'm resting.”

“At 11 p.m.?”

“Yes.”

He looked at the chair.

Then at her.

“Do you want company?”

“No.”

He nodded.

“Okay.”

He went inside.

Two minutes later, he came back with a chair.

They sat together.

At 11:17, the elevator dinged.

Both stood up.

Footsteps.

A shadow appeared at the end of the hallway.

It came closer.

Then closer.

Mrs. Sato gripped the edge of her chair.

The person stopped.

It was Kenji from Apartment 2A.

He was holding a plastic bag.

Everyone stared at him.

Kenji stared back.

“What?”

Mr. Watanabe pointed at the bottle.

“Are you leaving the water?”

Kenji looked confused.

“No.”

“Then what are you doing?”

“Going to the vending machine.”

He held up the bag.

Inside were three canned coffees.

Mrs. Sato looked disappointed.

Kenji looked nervous.

“Why are you looking at me like that?”

“Nothing,” she said.

He walked away.

At 11:17, the elevator had been a false alarm.

The bottle appeared anyway.

Which meant whoever was leaving it had another way into the building.

Now it was officially a mystery.

And Mrs. Sato was enjoying herself.

She told everyone she was not enjoying herself.

But she was.

For the first time in months, she had something to look forward to.

Every night at 11:17, someone might appear.

She began sitting by the door with Mr. Watanabe.

Sometimes they talked.

Sometimes they argued.

Sometimes they simply listened.

One night, Mr. Watanabe asked:

“Why do you think someone is doing this?”

Mrs. Sato looked at the bottle.

“I don't know.”

“Maybe they know you're alone.”

She looked at him.

“I am not alone.”

He smiled.

“No?”

“No.”

She pointed at him.

“You're annoying.”

He laughed.

“That's not the same thing.”

But they both knew what she meant.

Then, on the ninth night, something changed.

At 11:17, no bottle appeared.

Mrs. Sato waited.

11:20.

11:30.

Midnight.

Nothing.

She opened the door.

The hallway was empty.

For some reason, the absence bothered her more than the bottles ever had.

The next morning, she asked the building manager if anyone had moved out.

“No.”

“Did anyone complain about something?”

“No.”

“Did you see anyone suspicious?”

The manager laughed.

“Mrs. Sato, you are the suspicious one.”

She didn't laugh.

That afternoon, she noticed something.

A small piece of paper had been stuck underneath her doormat.

She picked it up.

There were only six words.

Please don't wait outside tonight.

Mrs. Sato stared at it.

Then she called Mr. Watanabe.

He came immediately.

They read the note together.

“Do you know who wrote it?” he asked.

“No.”

“Should we tell the police?”

She looked at him.

“About someone leaving water?”

He thought about it.

“No.”

“Exactly.”

That night, they didn't sit outside.

But they stayed awake.

11:10.

11:15.

11:17.

Nothing.

11:30.

Still nothing.

Then they heard a noise downstairs.

A door opening.

Footsteps.

Mr. Watanabe looked at Mrs. Sato.

She looked at him.

They went downstairs.

The building entrance was open.

A young man was standing outside.

He was holding a plastic bag.

He looked at them and froze.

Nobody spoke.

Then Mrs. Sato said:

“Are you the one leaving the water?”

The young man lowered his head.

“Yes.”

“Why?”

He looked embarrassed.

“I don't know how to explain it.”

“Try.”

He took a breath.

“My mother used to live here.”

Mrs. Sato frowned.

“Which apartment?”

“4B.”

She stared at him.

“Your mother?”

He nodded.

“She died last year.”

Silence.

“She always complained about the heat,” he continued. “She hated summer. Every night, I'd bring her cold water before I went home.”

Mrs. Sato looked at the bottle in his hand.

“I moved away after she died,” he said. “But I came back recently. I don't know why.”

He laughed nervously.

“I started leaving the water outside the apartment.”

“Why?”

He looked at the floor.

“Because it felt wrong to stop.”

Nobody said anything.

Then Mrs. Sato asked:

“Why didn't you just tell me?”

“I didn't know how.”

She nodded slowly.

“That's a poor excuse.”

The young man smiled.

“Yes.”

She looked at the bottle.

“Your mother liked this brand?”

“Yes.”

Mrs. Sato took it from him.

Then she said:

“Tomorrow, bring two.”

He looked confused.

“Two?”

“One for me.”

She pointed at Mr. Watanabe.

“And one for him.”

Mr. Watanabe smiled.

“Why am I involved?”

“Because you sit outside my apartment every night.”

“I thought you didn't want company.”

“I changed my mind.”

The young man laughed.

And just like that, the mystery ended.

Or at least, the mystery of the water did.

But something else had begun.

The next evening, there were three bottles outside Apartment 4B.

One for Mrs. Sato.

One for Mr. Watanabe.

And one for the young man.

They sat in the hallway together.

Nobody mentioned the heat.

Nobody needed to.

The young man told them stories about his mother.

Mr. Watanabe complained about the vending machine.

Mrs. Sato complained about Mr. Watanabe.

At 11:17, they laughed.

Later, when everyone had gone home, Mrs. Sato stood alone in her doorway.

She looked down the hallway.

The building was quiet.

The summer night was still warm.

She picked up her bottle.

It was cold against her hand.

And she realized something she hadn't expected.

She had spent days trying to discover who was leaving the water.

But maybe that wasn't really the mystery.

The real mystery was how easily people could disappear from one another's lives without anyone noticing.

A woman loses her husband.

A son loses his mother.

A man loses his job.

A neighbor eats dinner alone.

Someone stops knocking on a door.

Someone else stops asking why.

And then one hot summer, a cold bottle of water appears in a hallway.

Someone notices.

Someone asks.

Someone stays.

Maybe that's all it takes sometimes.

Not a grand rescue.

Not a perfect friendship.

Just a small act that says:

I know you're here.

Mrs. Sato closed her door.

Then opened it again.

She looked down the hallway.

“Tomorrow,” she called to Mr. Watanabe's apartment, “bring snacks.”

From behind the door came his voice.

“I knew you'd eventually become demanding.”

She smiled.

“Goodnight.”

“Goodnight.”

Outside, the summer heat pressed against the windows.

Inside, for the first time in a long time, nobody in Apartment 4B felt quite so alone.

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    Written by Ajan Lori A.