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The Reckoning

Homecoming

By Ahed AttarPublished 4 years ago 2 min read
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Greg sat still in the train. He stared out, his eyes focused on the green hills which rolled into each other as the rain lashed against the glass window. Rain burst forth from the black clouds. It felt like the biting wind from outside had cascaded into the train carriage. Greg shivered. His right hand tightened around the lapels of his long black coat as he wrapped it close to his body.

He was going to his hometown for the first time in years. Robert was dead and Greg was attending the funeral. The screech of the engine resonated through the carriage as the train glided to a halt at the station. Greg drew a deep breath. He stood, picked up his briefcase and stumbled towards the exit of the train carriage.

He had spent years pushing the memories of that night to the furthest recesses of his mind. But they were flooding back. His mind was racing.

He remembered the salty taste in his mouth as he thrust his head above the freezing water, the fast current dragging his body forward as he clung onto the limp body of Salim. The waves crashed around him, threatening to forever submerge them both. He desperately used his free arm to try to propel himself and Salim to the embankment. Blood gushed down from the cut in his scalp, obscuring his vision. He saw the embankment growing slowly bigger as he squinted through the blood and water. Four figures stood on the edge beckoning him towards them. His free arm pushed against the waves as he swam in the right direction, forcing his body toward the land. The embankment loomed large before him. He could see the features of the figures more and more clearly.

A big wave crashed against him. He was pushed beneath the surface. He kicked his legs, propelling his body up. Salim’s body slipped from his grip. Greg shoved his head above the water’s surface. He blinked repeatedly, looking around in the water. Salim’s body was nowhere to be found.

Greg motioned at the taxi outside the train station and it stopped before him. Once he was inside, he texted Fred ‘I’ve reached’.

The response was immediate, ‘Come to the house.’ There was no doubt the others would be there too.

Greg gave the driver the directions and sat back, clutching his coat close to his body. The taxi set off. The rain relentlessly hammered the glass windows. Greg swallowed. Nobody else had been there that night. But, beyond comprehension, so many years later, it was clear. Someone else knew. No secrets remain buried forever.

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About the Creator

Ahed Attar

I’m a Qualified Solicitor who enjoys writing in my spare time, dabbling in my different areas of interest.

I’m currently writing a criminal thriller story. I hope you have a read and let me know what you think.

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