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Lyric Breakdown: Castle on the Hill

The soulful melody of Ed Sheeran

By Gabriel B. ShamesPublished 12 days ago 3 min read

Unlike my other breakdowns, we’re gonna go back to something more classic today. While I might definitely have chosen “The Shape of You,” I think it’s more appropriate to introduce a legend like Ed Sheeran by his most iconic song.

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** “When I was six years old, I broke my leg./
I was runnin' from my brother and his friends/
And tasted the sweet perfume of the mountain grass I rolled down…./
I was younger then, take me back to when —

I’m on my way,/ Driving at ninety down those old country lanes…/ Singing to “Tiny Dancer!”/

And I miss the way you make me feel,/ It’s Real/ We watched the sunset/ Over the castle on the hill.” **

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Almost impossible to know where to start there. So much waxing poetic.

But first off… am I the only one who thought for sure it was driving at nineteen?! “Driving at nineteen down those old country lanes.”

I don’t think I’m alone in saying the real wording kinda changes to whole thing for me. Maybe I put too much emotion into things like this… but there seems to be a huge emotional difference between those two phrases.

“At nineteen” to me evokes a young man full of wonder. It’s a pivotal time, nineteen years old. And I can see in my mind’s eye him using the car for freedom, and searching for adventure in life. The wind truly blowing through his hair.

That’s what I expected to write about during this section. That gleaming, cinematic image.

But to know now that it’s “ninety,” as in miles per hour…. Ugh. Well, let’s let the image I (and many others) had hang there for a moment anyway.

He could still be poetically nineteen years old. But going ninety miles an hour makes him sound too free. Like a reckless punk.

To be fair, it could be kilometers per hour though. Then I think it’s a lot less. Still maybe 70 mph.

That might fit with the original image, as you can push the pedal quite a bit if it’s an unoccupied “country lane.”

So that’s a long way of saying the “true meaning”or “true image” can change with the wording, but maybe the feeling doesn’t have to.

Because we still all resonate with that moment, singing along to that song means the most in our lives.

“Ed Sheeran celebrates his billboard hit with a tour of his hometown.”

And of course, with the introductory “I’m on my way,” it encapsulates that conflicted rush into adulthood we’ve all felt.

It can be the total excitement of “on my way!” Or the dull, cloudy side of it with “I guess I’m on my way.” 😁/🤷‍♂️

Then the fact that the song is specifically Elton John’s “Tiny Dancer” deserves its own paragraph here.

If you don’t consider this to be one of the more impactful songs of all time, we’ve got a lot more to talk about. Whether you consider its indelible quality inspiring or annoying now, I think most all of us can agree on that.

There may never again be songs like his, or that of Queen. They stretch back to a time when, as an another song puts it, “music could save your mortal soul.”

This was cemented into legend with “Tiny Dancer” in the underrated gem, early 2000’s film Almost Famous. Even if you just catch a clip of that scene, and you’ll find the one if you search it… you won’t be disappointed.

It’s a triumphant homage with, basically, a bus full of people spontaneously “getting saved” with the song.

So it says a whole lot about Ed Sheeran’s musical lineage too.

Then, of course, the moment is topped off with the romantic scene of not just watching a sunset together, but with the backdrop of a majestic castle.

We all can resonate with it, too… looking back with longing at “the way you made me feel.” Along with holding on to the perfect, beautiful memory of such a time.

As much I want to get into the other lyrics, as I usually do with a breakdown like this — including the incredible narrative of “his first kiss on a Friday night” and “not sure he did it right” — I feel like this is actually a natural wrapping up point.

My own sunset image

I think with this song, just like with Ed himself and “Tiny Dancer,” we can always carry it along with us. And we remember throughout our life all the times it touched us. 🎶🩵

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Gabriel B. Shames

I’m an east coast American, interested in writing poetry and fiction as long as I can remember. I took a test in 4th grade where they told me I wrote creatively at a college level!

Hope you enjoy reading as much I as I do creating ❣️

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    Written by Gabriel B. Shames