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The Haunted Train: A Tale of Malevolent Passengers

A Tale of Malevolent Passengers

By Cansu AtayPublished about a year ago 5 min read
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The train was an old, steam-powered locomotive that had seen better days. Its carriages were rusted and battered, with windows that were foggy and difficult to see through. But despite its dilapidated appearance, it still ran on schedule, carrying passengers to their destinations without fail.

One evening, a group of travelers boarded the train, unaware of the horrors that awaited them. They settled into their seats and chatted amiably, passing the time as the train chugged along the tracks. But as the sun began to set and darkness descended, a sense of unease began to creep over them.

The train entered a tunnel, and the passengers were plunged into total darkness. The only light came from the dim lanterns that swayed back and forth on the walls of the carriage. The air grew thick and oppressive, and the passengers felt as if they were suffocating.

Suddenly, the train screeched to a halt, and the lights flickered out completely. The passengers were left in total darkness, with only the sound of their own breathing to keep them company.

At first, they tried to remain calm, reassuring each other that the train must have hit a bump or encountered some sort of mechanical difficulty. But as the minutes ticked by and no explanation was forthcoming, their anxiety began to mount.

Then, they heard it: a low, throaty growl that seemed to emanate from the walls of the carriage itself. It was a sound that made their hair stand on end, that set their teeth on edge. And as they strained their ears to listen, the growl grew louder and more insistent.

The passengers huddled together, their faces pale with fear. They knew that something was very wrong, that they were not alone on the train. And then, just as suddenly as it had begun, the growling stopped.

For a moment, the passengers held their breath, waiting for the next shoe to drop. But instead, they heard a soft, scraping sound, like metal against metal. It was a sound that sent shivers down their spines, that made their stomachs churn with dread.

And then, they saw it. A metal hand, gripping the edge of the carriage door. It was a hand made of steel and gears, glinting in the dim light of the lanterns. And as they watched in horror, the hand slowly pushed the door open, revealing a figure standing on the threshold.

The figure was tall and gaunt, with skin that was stretched tight over its bones. Its eyes glowed a sickly green in the darkness, and its lips were twisted into a grotesque smile. It wore a long coat that was tattered and torn, and a hat that obscured its face.

The passengers recoiled in terror, scrambling back against the walls of the carriage. But the figure paid them no mind, instead stepping forward into the carriage with an eerie grace. Its movements were slow and deliberate, like a predator stalking its prey.

And then, it spoke. Its voice was raspy and unnatural, like the sound of rusted gears grinding together. It said only one word, but it was enough to send the passengers into a frenzy of terror.

"Tickets."

The passengers fumbled for their tickets, holding them out to the figure with shaking hands. The figure snatched them up, examining them with an intensity that was almost manic. And then, without a word, it handed them back and disappeared back into the darkness of the train.

The passengers were left gasping for breath, their hearts pounding in their chests. They knew that they had just encountered something beyond their understanding, something that should not exist in the world of men.

And as the train roared back to life and continued on its journey, the passengers sat in stunned silence, wondering if what they had just experienced was real or a shared hallucination. But the memory of the figure with the metal hand and the glowing green eyes stayed with them, haunting them long after they disembarked at their destination.

Over the next few days, strange things began to happen to the passengers. They would hear growling in the middle of the night, or catch glimpses of the figure out of the corners of their eyes. Some even reported waking up to find the figure standing at the foot of their beds, staring at them with its glowing green eyes.

As the days turned into weeks, the passengers began to lose their grip on reality. They were plagued by nightmares and waking hallucinations, unable to shake the feeling that they were being watched by something malevolent.

And then, one by one, they began to disappear. They would be walking down the street, or sitting in a cafe, or going about their daily business, and then suddenly they would be gone. No trace of them was ever found, and no one could explain what had happened to them.

The only clue was a faint smell of burning wax, like that of a candle snuffed out. It was a smell that the surviving passengers knew only too well, a smell that reminded them of the lanterns that had flickered on the walls of the train carriage.

In the end, only a handful of passengers survived to tell the tale of the haunted train. They spoke of the figure with the metal hand and the glowing green eyes, of the growling and the scraping, of the suffocating darkness and the burning wax.

But no one believed them. They were dismissed as crazed survivors of a train crash, or as victims of some elaborate hoax. And so the story of the haunted train faded into obscurity, a footnote in the annals of forgotten horror.

But for those who had lived through it, the memory of the train and its malevolent passenger never faded. They knew that they had witnessed something beyond human comprehension, something that should have never been allowed to exist in the world. And they knew that they would never be able to forget the horror that they had experienced on that fateful train journey.

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