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Horror Story "Echoes of the Brokenhearted"

"Eternally Bound: A Ghostly Love Story in an Abandoned Metro Station"

By SonamjPublished about a year ago β€’ 3 min read
Horror Story "Echoes of the Brokenhearted"
Photo by Nong V on Unsplash

A lady had a breakup and after few days she called her ex-boyfriend. Her boyfriend didn't respond the call and left message to call her back in few minute. She was alone in the whole metro station. The lady, still reeling from her recent breakup, dialed her ex-boyfriend's number with shaky hands. She waited anxiously for him to pick up, but the call went straight to voicemail. She left a message, asking him to call her back as soon as possible. She hung up the phone, feeling a pit of despair in her stomach.

She looked around the empty metro station, the only sounds coming from the echoing announcements over the loudspeaker. She was all alone, and the eerie silence only added to her growing sense of unease.

As she waited for her ex-boyfriend to call her back, strange things began to happen. She heard whispers coming from the shadows, and the lights flickered erratically. She tried to shake off the feeling that someone, or something, was watching her. But the more she tried to ignore it, the more intense the feeling became.

Suddenly, the phone rang, making her jump. She answered it eagerly, hoping it was her ex-boyfriend calling her back. But the voice on the other end was not his. It was a distorted, ominous voice that sent chills down her spine.

"I've been waiting for you," the voice said. "I've been watching you. I know everything about you."

The lady was terrified, she tried to hang up the phone but it was not disconnecting. She was trapped, listening to the voice on the other end of the line as it continued to speak in a menacing tone.

"I know about your breakup. I know about your pain. And I can make it all go away. But you have to come with me. You have to come deeper into the station. You have to come to the place where the trains never run."

The lady knew she should run, but something about the voice compelled her to obey. She felt like she was under a spell, and she couldn't resist the pull to go deeper into the station.

As she walked, the light grew dimmer and the whispers grew louder. She felt like she was being followed, and she couldn't shake the feeling that something was lurking in the shadows. She finally reached the place where the trains never run, and there she found an old, rusty train car. The door was open, and she felt compelled to enter.

Inside, she found a man dressed in black, who revealed to her that he is the ghost of an ex-boyfriend of a lady who committed suicide after he broke up with her in this same metro station. He was stuck here, haunting this place and luring in other broken hearted people to join him in his eternal misery.

The lady was horrified and tried to run, but she found herself trapped inside the train car. The ghost was now standing right in front of her, his eyes glowing with a malevolent light.

"You can never leave," he said. "You belong to me now. Forever."

The lady screamed, but no one was there to hear her. She was trapped, alone and terrified, forever trapped in the ghost train of the metro station.

From that day on, the metro station was abandoned and avoided by locals, as they say that the ghost of the broken hearted ex-boyfriend can still be heard whispering in the dark, and the ghost train can still be seen by those brave enough to venture into the abandoned station.


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