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Echoes of Hope

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By Rinto MahsuhadiPublished 17 days ago 2 min read
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it tells the story of two children who were banished in front of the burgollet village church, isroof as the founder of the church and the priest there picked up the two children and behind the two children there were business cards, namely ather and youma,

"8 years later"

the two boys grew up in a very strong magic sword environment, but their personalities are very much different ather as a jolly and optimistic child does not have the mana to cast magic and instead youma has a calm and whiny nature has a lot of mana and is loved mana ,

one time when Youma walked home, youma was blocked by some bandits who wanted to kidnap youma to be sold in the city as a slave there, when night fell youma did not come home, isroof as a church pastor was very worried about the state of youma who did not come home finally isroof decided to look for youma in the village sector, ather as a friend was also looking for youma's whereabouts in the forest, during a 20-minute walk Ather found a tent in the forest, Ather saw youma tied up and in brackets ather decided to save youma, ather without thinking immediately hit one of the bandits with his fist and the bandits were surprised to see a small child who ran and lunged, a bandit said "Why is there a small child into debt, already we can catch one more child for us to sell to the city" a fight ensued between ather and some bandits, until in the end Ather exhausted, Youma saw the incident depressed and purstasi and veteran "Atheeeeer" youma was very angry where in the body Youma overflowed out Youma's magic was very powerful to destroy youma's place in brackets the bandits looked at youma, the bandits looked very surprised and scared to see youma's strength, the chairman of the bandits calmed the other bandits he was just a child, ather who saw the incident was very surprised to see a very strong youma, the bandits were tied up and the villagers who heard the incident in the village arrived and the bandits were handed over to the village chief burgollet.

"FLASHBACK"

"when at the age of 6 years old Ather told me he wanted to be able to enter the Magic Knight in the city and become the emperor of the magic sword is very great so that all the people in the leadership are all prosperous and never feel hunger want that in the city or in the village though, youma was very angry when ather told him, Youma loudly said "You have to be aware of yourself with your strength, with courage and determination alone will not be enough" ather did not care and said I would prove to youma that even orphans can become magic sword emperors, since then youma was very upset and hated when he saw Ather who did not know himself.

ather and youma walked towards the village while Youma looked at ather Youma said "Thank you for coming to save me" Ather smiled in response to youma's words, youma continued saying that he also wanted to become a great magic sword Emperor much more powerful than you, Ather said "What" since then they became rivals to achieve the sword Emperor.

Furthermore, the adventure of ather and youma to become the emperor of Swords will begin in the next chapter, they will go to the city together, look forward to their journey!!!

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Rinto Mahsuhadi

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