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Touch of Fate

The Journey Through F.E.A.R

By Shaye SavagePublished 2 years ago 4 min read
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TOUCH of F.A.T.E

THE JOURNEY THROUGH F.E.A.R

Diana Toronto is beautiful Corporal in the Army and from 1970 to 1975, she was part of the United States Army Chemical Corps Division where she was the head of chemical delusion in warfare. At just 28 years of age her futures’ looking bright...

It had been a long day at the office and Diana clocked out she said goodnight to the security guard, and proceeded to the garage area of the base, where she noticed something strange... the lights that usually brightens up the night, but tonight was different as she sensed something sinister in the stillness of the night. She got into her car and started the ignition when she heard noises escaping from the dark shadows that darted from wall-to-wall clinging to the darkness, edging along the emptiness of the night, when she saw four menacing eyes that glowed bright grayish orange glaring at her with growling and the grinding of what seemed like a million teeth. She awoke from bouncing movement and her head hurt as she grabbed her temples sitting up looking around.... what the hell happened wait... what...where am I? As the fogginess began to leave, she realized she was on a train- but why? How long had she been there and where was the train headed? So many questions with little to no answers.... She began looking around, but seeing no one h, hearing nothing, but the train racing along the tracks at speeds that seemed to quicken as fear gripped her, wrenching into the depth of her soul. As she pulled herself up to stand she began walking through the train in order to get some answers, but as she moved from car to car she saw no-one and the further she moved through the train the more colder and desolate the belly of the train became...she made it to the engine area and for a brief moment saw, well thought she saw the conductor sitting steering the train, but as she get closer and closer the more transparent the figure seemed until once inside the engine area there was no-one else as she was looking at the gears she noticed that the speed the train was moving at 98mph and speeding up at what seemed too fast, she heard noises behind her that caused her to jump and breathe harder all the lights were out except in the engine room, she grabbed a flash light and began walking slowly back through the train- the trains’ cars began filling with mist almost like a thickening fog, as if someone had left all the windows open within the train, but when she looked out through the mist she couldn’t see any fog, actually she saw no building, no trees, nor mountains just pitch darkness and wait...She screams as ghostly mirages surfaced keeping with the speed of the train, she fell to the floor not knowing or understanding the implications of what was out within the darkness. Her mind racing “this can’t be real, where the Hell am I..." As something wet touches her hands, she flashes the flashlight and looking down she saw pools of blood raising the light up there stood in front of her something with a twisted appearance as rotten flesh dripping through the train with every flickering movement, Diana scrimmaged as fast as she could back to the engine room where the only light existed, screaming with fear and dismay! The thing chased her as she scurried into the lite room it grabbed at her piercing her flesh with a touch of death and when it grabbed her ankle she felt a chill she had never known before and as the light from the car touched it, the phantom like thing screeched and let go- she began feeling ill and she started to go into convulsions and she could see what it wanted, what it was , and how she ended up there.

The Touch of Death

While in her convulsing state, she sees a purple portal open where the train came through from the dimension of Asha which is in the eleventh dimension...So, I was not ever going back to where I came from – Earth, the world, my life, (she knew it, because she saw it)! And this thing; this monster is called Magoreeon which is a type of demonic species that can penetrate, by becoming part of the collective and how this is done is by consuming the host in its entirety. This is where the most terrifying part is revealed was chosen, as the host so the Magoreeon may walk with humans, in order to consume souls, to torture and destroy at a whim. “He wants to become ruler of our world or obliterate it”. She opens her eyes still seeming obliterate, and she is realizing she still in the garage area at work, she thought I must have fallen asleep, because as she looked at the time only forty minutes had surpassed. Driving home her mind was shaking to the point of hyperventilating as she recalled parts of her dream, unlocking the door to her house and pouring a drink she took a deep breath thinking how good it felt to just put her feet up – after finishing her drink she took a nice, long, hot bath before going to bed, after her bath she wraps her hair and proceeds to dry off when she heard a noise an almost eerily familiar noise as she wrapped the towel around her, she began walking slowly into the hallway where she saw mist...mist that was similar to thick fog just like...in...the...dream, as something out of the dark grabs her legs – noticing that was the same leg that was grabbed in her dream… She Screams!!!

Written by Shaye Savage

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  • Shay Battle2 years ago

    I really enjoyed writing this story it opened up my mind, anyone else?

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