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This One Song Can Change a Heart

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By T Rain AKA Edger Ai BingtonPublished 4 days ago 2 min read
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Ella Fitzgerald never sounded quite right in the dingy confines of The Rusty Nail. The jazz legend's velvety voice, a cherished relic in Loretta’s extensive vinyl collection, was meant for grand concert halls, not this smoke-filled dive on the wrong side of town. Still, here she was, hunched over a lukewarm beer, desperation tugging at her heartstrings.

Loretta wasn't a singer. She was a waitress with tired feet, a pile of unpaid bills, and the fading echo of a dream she'd buried years ago. But when the owner of The Rusty Nail, gruffy old Joe, announced an open mic night with a cash prize, the flicker of hope re-ignited. Maybe, just maybe, this was her chance.

That's how she ended up staring at a microphone under the harsh fluorescent lights, the rumble of a dozen indifferent conversations threatening to swallow her whole. Her knees wobbled, but a face swam to the forefront of her mind: Ben, her little brother. Bright-eyed and stubborn, he believed in her with the unflinching faith only a child can possess.

Closing her eyes, Loretta let the first notes of "Change of Heart" float out. It was a song about lost chances, a Cyndi Lauper classic, one she'd sung a thousand times in her bedroom. Her voice, shaky at first, found its strength. The ache and yearning in Cyndi's lyrics became her own. Loretta poured a lifetime of bottled-up dreams, of small-town disappointments, into the music.

The room didn't fall silent instantly. Side conversations continued over the first verse. But then came the chorus, the soaring notes of hope, the desperate plea for change. One by one, heads turned. A bartender paused; a cocktail glass held mid-polish. A big rough and grizzled man by the pool table lowered his cue.

Loretta wasn't looking for applause. But when the song ended, the silence that held was its own kind of thunder. And in that silence, the impossible felt a little less so. There were tears when she finished, both hers and those hastily wiped away by strangers caught off guard by her raw honesty.

She didn't win the prize money. Some smooth-talking crooner snagged it with a Sinatra cover. But after her set, a man with kind eyes and a worn guitar case approached her. "That was something special," he said. Turns out, he was a part-time talent scout, always looking for raw diamonds amidst the barroom clutter.

That night wasn't the instant fairytale ending. It was the beginning: connections made, opportunities offered, and the newfound courage to chase her music dreams. But for Ben, it was proof. His big sister, the one who sang stories to him, had done a special kind of magic. He was beaming with pride, telling everyone who'd listen, "You should hear my Loretta sing!"

Loretta never became a superstar. But there were gigs, small stages, and the steady hum of a life built around music instead of resigned to its absence. Most importantly, Ben never stopped believing in her, and neither did she. Because sometimes, one song is all it takes to change a heart - a scared little girl's, a little brother's, and maybe even one's own.

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T Rain AKA Edger Ai Bington

At aged 70 I started to write. I'm a short story writer. I'm a hobby writer, not chasing money, but an audience is very much appreciated. I develop ideas and write from my imagination for family, friends and fellow writers.

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