The Plan
Final Notes
- Make notes about the number of staff in and out of the building at all times.
- Organize a team of experts in safe-cracking and weapon use.
- Make sure not to involve that idiot Brian who thinks he's God's gift to crime whenever he gets drunk and starts bragging.
- Pick a day when all factors seem to be in your favour and make sure you do have a proper getaway vehicle (at least two of them must be available).
- Ignore the advice you receive from Brian about what types of vehicles you should use...like his.
- Point out to the team that Brian still drives the same car he had in high school and that he never had to pay for it.
- Use Brian's vehicle without telling him what your plans are.
- Remember that it is a holiday weekend and that no one is going to be in the building.
- Remember that Brian is also on holiday because he works there and knows the place inside and out.
- Bring Brian along to give you some general information.
- Decide that the weekend is too long and that you can wait for another date.
- Ignore Brian's and the team's offer to join them.
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Kendall Defoe
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Comments (7)
Sounds like a plan.
That was funny Kendall!
I love your humour! Nice!
Love the humor! XD
Lol, poor Brian! This was hilarious!
Brian found a way 😆
A refreshing, novel take on the challenge and not without its own unique charm It did bring this to mind - https://youtu.be/NnKp0cGuAh4 - well done KD!