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THE PHANTOM RIDE

A legend about an old, rusty car that was said to be haunted.

By Rhazan's PenPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

In the small town of Hollow Creek, there was a legend about an old, rusty car that was said to be haunted. The car, a 1967 Chevrolet Impala, was owned by a man named Jack. Jack was a mechanic who loved his car more than anything else in the world.

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He spent countless hours working on it, tuning it to perfection. But one fateful night, Jack met with an accident while driving the Impala and Jack was found lifeless behind the wheel, his hands still gripping it tightly. His sudden death sent shockwaves through Hollow Creek.

After Jack’s death, the Impala was left abandoned in his garage. It wasn’t long before strange things started happening. People reported seeing the car driving around town late at night with no driver behind the wheel. The car's headlights would flicker on and off, creating an eerie, ghostly glow that pierced the inky blackness.

Pedestrians who happened to be nearby would stop in their tracks, staring in awe and disbelief as the spectral Impala passed by. Some brave souls even attempted to approach the vehicle, only to be met with the unsettling sensation that they were being watched from within the car's empty interior.

Local legend and superstition began to take hold, with some claiming that Jack's restless spirit had somehow become intertwined with the car he had cherished so dearly. As the strange occurrences continued, the abandoned Impala became a symbol of the unexplained, a ghostly presence that haunted the town.

One day, a brave soul named Tom decided to investigate. He was a skeptic and didn’t believe in ghosts or haunted cars so he decided to buy the Impala from Jack’s estate sale and took it home, determined to debunk the myths surrounding it. That night, as Tom was working on the car in his garage, he heard a strange noise. It sounded like someone whispering his name.

Tom turned around but saw no one. He shrugged it off as his imagination and continued working. Suddenly, he felt a cold hand on his shoulder. He jumped up and spun around but again saw nothing. The garage was empty except for him and the Impala.

Over the next few days, Tom experienced more strange occurrences. He would find the Impala’s engine running in the middle of the night or the radio would turn on by itself, playing 60s rock music – Jack’s favorite.

One chilling night, Tom decided to take the Impala for a drive down an old deserted road that wound through the forest. As he was driving, he felt an unseen force take control of the car. No matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t steer or brake. The car seemed to have a mind of its own.

Suddenly, in his rear-view mirror, he saw Jack’s apparition and looked at him through sad eyes and whispered in a voice that echoed with regret and sorrow, “I’m sorry.” Tom watched in astonishment, unable to respond or even comprehend the surreal encounter, the car suddenly came to a jolting stop and the engine fell silent, the headlights flickered one last time before going dark. Panic washed over the driver as he realized that he was now stranded on a deserted road, surrounded by the impenetrable darkness of the night.

Shaken but unharmed, Tom got out of the car and ran all the way home. The next day, he returned the Impala to Jack’s old garage where it remains to this day.

People still report seeing the haunted Impala driving around Hollow Creek late at night. And while no one dares to go near it anymore, they all respect and remember Jack’s love for his car.

Horror

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  • Alex H Mittelman 9 months ago

    Nice! Great story!

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