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The Last Train Home

Train

By KarthickPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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The train rattled down the tracks, its engine chugging steadily as it cut through the darkness of the night. Inside the carriages, passengers dozed in their seats, lulled by the steady rhythm of the journey. Among them was a young woman named Maya, who was making her way home after a long day at work.

Maya had always loved taking the train. There was something comforting about the sound of the wheels on the tracks, and the way the scenery outside the window blurred into a blur of colours as the train picked up speed. But tonight, something felt different. As the train entered a tunnel, Maya felt a sudden jolt, and the lights flickered out.

For a moment, there was silence, broken only by the sound of the train's wheels grinding against the tracks. Then, the emergency lights flickered on, casting an eerie glow over the carriage. Maya looked around, her heart pounding in her chest. She was alone.

At first, she tried to convince herself that it was just a glitch, that the lights would come back on and the train would continue on its way. But as the minutes ticked by, it became clear that something was wrong. Maya reached for her phone, but there was no signal. She was trapped, alone in the dark.

As the hours passed, Maya tried to keep her spirits up. She had always been a resourceful person, and she was sure that she could find a way out of this situation. But as the night wore on, her hope began to wane. She was hungry, thirsty, and exhausted, and she had no idea when, or if, help would arrive.

It wasn't until the early hours of the morning that she heard a sound. It was faint at first, a rustling in the darkness. But as it grew louder, Maya realised that someone, or something, was approaching. She shrank back into her seat, her heart racing as she waited for whatever was out there to reveal itself.

The first thing she saw was a pair of glowing eyes, staring at her from the darkness. For a moment, Maya froze, her mind unable to process what she was seeing. Then, she realised that it was a fox, its fur matted and dirty. It seemed just as startled as she was, and it darted away into the shadows.

Maya breathed a sigh of relief. For a moment, she had been sure that it was something much worse. But as she settled back into her seat, she felt a creeping sense of unease. What if there were other animals out there, larger and more dangerous? What if the fox had been a warning of what was to come?

It was a thought that plagued her for the rest of the night, as she sat alone in the dark. But as the first light of dawn began to filter through the windows, she felt a glimmer of hope. Maybe, just maybe, someone would come to rescue her.

It wasn't until mid-morning that help finally arrived. The train's conductor, a kind-faced man named Mr Patel, had managed to get a signal on his radio and had called for assistance. As soon as the emergency services arrived, they got to work, using cutting equipment to pry open the train doors and free the passengers who had been trapped inside.

As Maya stepped out into the sunlight, she felt a wave of relief wash over her. She was free, safe, and alive. But as she looked back at the train, she felt a pang of sadness. For all its faults and flaws, the train had been her home for a night, a place where she had faced her fears and come out the other side.

It was a feeling that stayed with her long after she had.




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