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THE LAST GOODBYE

I Would Still Be Waiting

By Onyedi Sharon Published 12 months ago 3 min read

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Amidst the fading twilight, a gentle breeze swept through the desolate streets, carrying with it the bittersweet scent of memories long gone. In the heart of a forgotten town, stood an abandoned house, a relic of a forgotten era. Its cracked walls and shattered windows whispered tales of bygone days, when laughter and love filled its once vibrant rooms.

Within those weathered walls, a flickering candle illuminated a solitary figure. Maria, a woman in her twilight years, sat by the window, her weary eyes fixed upon the distant horizon. Wrinkles etched deep lines across her face, marking the passage of time and the weight of her solitude.

As the day surrendered to night, Maria's mind wandered back to a time when her life had been filled with joy and companionship. Her beloved husband, Antonio, had been the light of her world. They had shared a love so pure and fierce, it seemed to defy the limits of time. But fate had been cruel, snatching Antonio away, leaving Maria stranded in a desolate sea of loneliness.

Tonight, however, was different. Tonight, Maria felt an inexplicable presence, an echo of the past that tugged at her heartstrings. She reached out to the glass of the old window, tracing her fingers along the spiderweb cracks, as if seeking connection.

Suddenly, a vision materialized before her eyes, within the reflection of the glass. An eye stared back at her, captivating and mysterious, holding a universe of stories yet untold. And within that eye, Maria saw a figure, a man, trapped within its depths, yearning for release.

The man's voice whispered softly, a haunting melody carried by the wind. "Maria, my love, I am here. Can you see me?" His words echoed through the room, igniting a spark of hope within her soul.

Tears welled up in Maria's eyes as she realized that Antonio, her dear departed husband, was reaching out to her from beyond the veil. With trembling hands, she pressed her palm against the cold surface of the window, longing to touch the ethereal figure on the other side.

"I see you, Antonio," she murmured, her voice quivering with emotion. "I've missed you so much."

Antonio's image shimmered within the eye, his face etched with both joy and sorrow. "Maria, my love, I cannot stay long. Our time is fleeting. But I want you to know that I have never truly left you. I am here, forever bound to your heart."

As their gazes locked, time seemed to stand still. In that ephemeral moment, the boundaries between the physical and the spiritual blurred, and their love transcended the constraints of mortality.

"I would give anything to be with you again, Antonio," Maria whispered, her voice choked with longing. "To hold you, to feel your warmth."

Antonio's eyes shimmered with tears, mirroring her anguish. "And I would give anything to be by your side, my love. But our paths lie in separate realms. We must find solace in the memories we shared."

As the night wore on, their conversation waned, and the ethereal image began to fade. Maria's heart ached, yet a glimmer of peace lingered within her. She knew that she would forever carry Antonio's love within her soul, and their bond would endure even as the years passed.

With a final, tearful smile, Maria whispered, "Goodbye, my love. Until we meet again."

The eye in the window closed, and the connection between Maria and Antonio dissolved into the depths of the night. Yet, as Maria turned away from the window, a sense

of tranquility washed over her. She knew that, though their physical worlds would forever remain apart, the love they shared would forever intertwine their souls.

And so, Maria continued her solitary existence in the old, abandoned house. She treasured the memories she had created with Antonio, cherishing them as if they were fragile, fading petals of a once vibrant flower.

Time passed, seasons changed, and Maria grew older, but her love for Antonio remained steadfast. In her heart, she carried the echo of their final goodbye, embracing the hope that one day, their souls would reunite.

For as long as she lived, Maria would continue to wait, her unwavering love and devotion serving as a beacon of light in the darkness. And though the world may have forgotten her, the last goodbye between Maria and Antonio would forever echo through the corridors of eternity, an eternal testament to the power of love.

Short StoryYoung AdultHorrorFantasyfiction

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