The sirens call
**The Siren’s Call**---The moon hung low in the sky, casting a silver glow across the endless expanse of the sea. The night was quiet, save for the gentle lapping of waves against the hull of the *Odyssey*, a sturdy fishing vessel that had seen its fair share of storms and triumphs. Its crew, a ragtag group of seasoned fishermen and adventurers, had spent the last few days trawling the deep waters far from the mainland, seeking a bounty that would make the long journey worthwhile.Captain Elias Byrne, a grizzled man with salt-and-pepper hair and a face weathered by years at sea, stood at the bow, his sharp eyes scanning the horizon. The crew had just finished hauling in the last catch of the day, and the air was thick with the scent of saltwater and fish. They were far from any land, in a stretch of ocean known for its isolation and treacherous depths. But it was also rumored to be home to something more—a mystery that had lured many to their doom.“Captain, what’s on your mind?” asked Finn, the ship’s first mate, a tall, lanky man with a quick wit and a quicker smile. He had known Elias for over a decade, ever since they had first met on a voyage to the northern islands. They had seen many things together, but there was something different about this journey—something that set Finn on edge.Elias didn’t answer immediately. His gaze remained fixed on the water, as if searching for something just beneath the surface. Finally, he spoke, his voice low and gravelly. “Do you hear that, Finn?”Finn frowned, listening intently. The only sound he could hear was the gentle sloshing of the waves against the boat. “Hear what, Captain?”“That,” Elias replied, his eyes narrowing. “That song.”Finn strained to listen, but there was nothing—no music, no singing, just the quiet of the night. “I don’t hear anything,” he said, though his voice carried a hint of uncertainty.Elias shook his head, a strange intensity in his eyes. “It’s there. Faint, but it’s there. Like a whisper on the wind.”Finn looked at him with concern. “Captain, maybe you’re just tired. It’s been a long day, and—”Elias cut him off with a wave of his hand. “No, it’s not that. I’ve heard it before. Years ago, on a night just like this. Back when I was a young man, foolish and headstrong. We were out here, in these waters, when I first heard the call. The crew thought I was mad. But I wasn’t.”A chill ran down Finn’s spine. He had heard the old tales, the legends of sailors being lured to their deaths by the siren’s call, a haunting melody that beckoned them to the depths. But those were just stories, meant to scare young deckhands and keep them in line. Weren’t they?“Captain,” Finn began, choosing his words carefully, “we’ve been at sea for a while now. Maybe we should head back, get some rest. The men—”“No,” Elias interrupted, his voice firm. “We’re staying. We’re close, Finn. Closer than I’ve ever been. And this time, I’m going to find it.”Finn hesitated. Elias had always been a good captain—brave, level-headed, and fair. But this obsession, this fixation on a sound only he could hear, was something new. It worried Finn, more than he cared to admit. But he knew better than to argue with the captain when his mind was set.“Alright, Captain,” Finn said quietly. “But we should be careful. These waters... they’re not like the others.”Elias nodded, though his attention was already elsewhere. He turned back to the sea, his eyes gleaming with a mix of determination and something else—something darker, more desperate.The hours dragged on, the moon climbing higher in the sky, casting eerie shadows across the deck. The crew, sensing the captain’s mood, kept to themselves, their voices hushed as they went about their tasks. Even the usual camaraderie among the men was subdued, a tension hanging in the air like a storm about to break.As the night wore on, Finn couldn’t shake the feeling that something was watching them, something lurking just beyond the edge of sight. He tried to dismiss it as paranoia, the result of too many hours at sea and too little sleep. But the feeling persisted, gnawing at him like a festering wound.Then, just as Finn was beginning to think the night would pass uneventfully, he heard it—a faint, melodic sound, drifting on the wind. It was barely more than a whisper, but it was there. He froze, his heart skipping a beat. Was it real? Or was his mind playing tricks on him, feeding off the captain’s words?“Finn,” Elias’s voice cut through the silence, startling him. The captain was standing at the bow, his back to Finn, staring intently at the water. “You hear it now, don’t you?”Finn swallowed hard, his mouth suddenly dry. “I... I think so. But, Captain, we shouldn’t—”Elias turned to face him, and Finn was taken aback by the look in his eyes. There was a wildness there, a fervor that bordered on madness. “It’s here, Finn. It’s calling us. We can’t turn back now.”Before Finn could respond, there was a sudden, violent lurch as the *Odyssey* shuddered beneath them, the deck tilting precariously to one side. Finn grabbed hold of the railing to steady himself, his heart racing.“What the hell was that?” one of the crewmen shouted, his voice tinged with panic.But Elias didn’t seem alarmed. If anything, he looked... exhilarated. “It’s here,” he whispered, more to himself than to anyone else. “It’s finally here.”The water around the boat began to churn, the once-calm sea now roiling as if something massive was moving beneath the surface. The song grew louder, more insistent, wrapping around them like a shroud.“Captain, we need to get out of here!” Finn shouted, his voice barely audible over the rising wind and waves.But Elias wasn’t listening. He was moving towards the edge of the boat, his eyes fixed on the water below. “Do you see it, Finn?” he called out, his voice filled with awe. “It’s beautiful.”Finn followed the captain’s gaze, and what he saw made his blood run cold. There, just beneath the surface of the water, was a shape—a massive, sinuous form that glowed with an eerie, ethereal light. It was impossible to make out the creature’s full form, but its presence was unmistakable. The song was coming from it, a melody so haunting and beautiful that it seemed to seep into Finn’s very soul.But there was something else in the water, too—dark shapes that moved with unnatural speed, circling the boat like predators closing in on their prey. And then, with a sudden, violent surge, one of the shapes shot towards the surface, breaking the water with a splash.It was a woman—or at least, it looked like a woman. Her skin was pale, almost translucent, and her long hair floated around her like a dark cloud. Her eyes were large and luminous, filled with a strange, otherworldly light. She opened her mouth, and the song grew louder, more powerful.Elias was transfixed, his face a mask of wonder and longing. He reached out a hand towards the creature, as if compelled by some invisible force.“Captain, don’t!” Finn shouted, rushing forward to grab him. But he was too late.Elias stepped up onto the railing, his eyes never leaving the woman in the water. “I’ve found it, Finn,” he murmured, a tear slipping down his weathered cheek. “I’ve finally found it.”And then, before Finn could stop him, Elias stepped off the edge of the boat, plunging into the dark, churning water below.“Captain!” Finn screamed, leaning over the side, desperately scanning the water for any sign of Elias. But there was nothing—no trace of him, or the woman, or the creature beneath the waves. The song had stopped, leaving only the sound of the wind and the waves.The crew rushed to Finn’s side, their faces pale with shock. “What happened?” one of them asked, his voice trembling. “Where’s the captain?”Finn shook his head, his heart heavy with grief and disbelief. “He’s gone,” he said quietly, his voice barely above a whisper. “The sea took him.”The crew fell silent, the weight of Finn’s words sinking in. They had lost their captain to the depths, to the mysterious, unknowable forces that lurked beneath the surface of the sea.As the *Odyssey* turned back towards the mainland, the crew somber and subdued, Finn stood at the bow, staring out at the dark horizon. The sea was calm again, the eerie stillness of the night returning. But Finn knew that the peace was only temporary. The sea held many secrets, and the siren’s call was one that would haunt him for the rest of his days.He clutched the ship’s wheel, his knuckles white with the force of his grip. “I’ll find you, Elias,” he whispered to the wind. “I’ll find you and bring you back.”But even as he spoke the words, Finn knew the truth in his heart: the sea had taken Elias, and the man he had known was lost forever.The sun began to rise as the *Odyssey* continued its slow journey back to the mainland. Finn stood at the helm, guiding the ship through the now placid waters. The first light of dawn cast a soft glow over the horizon, but it did little to lift the heavy pall that hung over the crew.No one spoke of what had happened. The men kept their eyes down, focusing on their work with a quiet determination. But the memory of that haunting song, and the sight of their captain stepping into the abyss, weighed on their minds. It was as if the ocean itself had claimed Elias, and the crew feared that speaking of it might draw the same fate upon them.As the hours passed, Finn remained at the wheel, his thoughts churning like the waters beneath them. He couldn’t shake the image of Elias’s face—those eyes filled with something beyond comprehension, and that tearful expression of peace, as if he had found what he had been searching for all his life. What had Elias seen in the depths? What had driven him to that fatal leap?Finn knew the stories, the legends of sirens and sea creatures that lured men to their doom. But he had never believed them—until now. The song had been real; he had heard it himself. But more terrifying than the song was the pull it had on Elias, as if something in the depths had called to him personally, singling him out from the rest of the crew.By midday, the mainland came into view, a hazy silhouette against the brightening sky. The sight brought a sense of relief to the men, who were eager to put the strange and terrifying night behind them. But for Finn, the sight of land only deepened the ache in his chest. The journey was ending, but his questions remained unanswered.As they approached the harbor, the crew busied themselves with preparations to dock, their movements quick and efficient. Finn, however, stayed at the helm, staring out at the sea. He couldn’t let go of the thought that there was something out there—something that had taken Elias and might take others if they weren’t careful.“Finn?” It was Samuel, one of the older crewmen, his voice rough from years of salt air. “We’re about ready to dock. You coming?”Finn nodded slowly, tearing his gaze away from the water. “Yeah, I’m coming.”The crew worked quickly to secure the *Odyssey*, tying her to the dock and unloading the catch. As the men filed off the ship, some heading for the taverns and others for home, Finn lingered by the gangplank, his heart heavy with the thought of returning without their captain.The harbor was bustling with activity as the fishermen unloaded their hauls, but Finn felt strangely detached from it all. The noise, the smells, the familiar sights—all seemed distant, as if he were seeing them through a fog. His thoughts kept drifting back to that night, to the sound of the song and the sight of Elias disappearing into the sea.He had always trusted Elias, followed him without question, and respected him as a leader. But now, Finn was left with nothing but doubt. Had Elias been searching for that creature all along? Was that why he had brought them so far out into the deep, dangerous waters? Or had the siren’s call been a cruel twist of fate, an accident of timing that had claimed his life?As the last of the crew left the ship, Finn found himself alone on the deck. He walked to the bow, where Elias had stood on that fateful night, and looked out at the horizon. The sea was calm now, its surface a mirror reflecting the clear sky above. But Finn knew better than to trust its placid appearance. Beneath that serene facade lay an entire world of mystery and danger—one that had taken his captain.Finn’s mind raced with a mix of grief, guilt, and a strange, growing determination. Elias might be gone, but his story wasn’t over. There were answers out there, in the deep waters where the song had first called to him. And Finn knew he couldn’t rest until he found them.He made a decision then, one that settled like a heavy stone in his chest. He would return to these waters. He would find out what had happened to Elias and what lay beneath the surface of the sea. It was a dangerous quest, perhaps even a fool’s errand, but it was something he had to do. For Elias, for the crew, and for himself.Finn left the *Odyssey* that day, but he didn’t go home. Instead, he headed for the shipyard, where he knew he could find a small, seaworthy vessel—one he could sail alone if necessary. He spent the rest of the day preparing, gathering supplies and ensuring the boat was ready for the journey ahead.By the time the sun was setting, Finn was back at the dock, standing beside his new vessel. The others might think him mad, just as they had thought Elias mad. But Finn didn’t care. There was something out there, something that had to be confronted.He looked out at the darkening sea, where the waves were already beginning to shimmer with the light of the rising moon. The song might call to him, just as it had called to Elias. And when it did, Finn would be ready. He would face whatever lurked in the depths, whatever had taken his captain.And if it meant he would never return, then so be it. Some answers were worth the risk.With a final glance at the *Odyssey*, now resting quietly in the harbor, Finn boarded his new boat and set sail, the wind carrying him out into the vast unknown. The sea stretched out before him, dark and endless, but Finn’s resolve was strong.The siren’s call would not claim him as it had claimed Elias. He would find the truth—or die trying.
Comments (14)
Damn zomb*es don't know when to stay down 💀 Great style, excellent prose and well-presented. Great work!
Those damned wars will never end. Horrible business no matter where it is fought. Great telling of the story, terrible business war. Congrats on TS.
Masterful storytelling! Most deserving of a Top Story. Very strong contender for the win!
Congrats on your marvelous story.
I'm loving this combination of horrors!
congrats on TS. This was excellently written. A story a long time waiting to be told. My brother was a combat engineer in NaTrang. He came home but never fully mentally recovered. My best friend never made it home. And yet, war goes on, doesn't it?
this is raw work, thanks
Damn, pal. This is...awesome. I love how intense this felt and like Matthew, forgot all about i words. What Are I words? You took a similar approach to the ideas in my head. When I see a challenge like this I instantly think "What is the hardest way to do this - I know, a horror story sent in winter in an icy landscape." lol. Well done, though, this is a great read and I love the epistolary format! :) Congrats on it getting the Top Story it deserves and I shall be very surprised and angry at Johnny Vocal if this isn't in the running for the top prize!
Such a well deserved top story
Just to let you know you are one of my five for this weeks Raise Your Voice https://vocal.media/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-07-11-2024
An amazing diaristic piece, and some great observations. Good luck, and no "I" words
Ohh man, this gave me throw back OG COD zombies vibes
Great job with the challenge! Favorite line was “But when have war and hope ever shared a room?”
This is fantastic. Good luck.