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The Fall

A Story of Humanity Micro

By D.K. ShepardPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
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The Fall
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It’s cold. Also dark. Your legs are caught in twisted sheets. You’re awake, but not. You try untangling yourself.

Suddenly you’re toppling over the edge. The fall seems endless. You were pushed.

Who?

You look up.

The hands that shoved you and the eyes looking into yours are your own.

Author's Note:

I wrote a trio of second person micros that are distinct stories but connected in their thematic progression. If you're interested, check out the other two linked below:

1. The Fall

2. The Wait

3. The Hope

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About the Creator

D.K. Shepard

Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now

Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.

dkshepard.com

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  • Joe O’Connor25 days ago

    Haunting last line D.K. This feels like a commentary on how humans have sealed their own fate perhaps? The title immediately makes me think of Adam and Eve and Paradise Lost etc.

  • JBaz29 days ago

    The final line is captivating. It really leaves you wanting more.

  • Fabulous finish to this micro fiction 🤩

  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨about a month ago

    This is my favourite of the three 😇🤍

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a month ago

    Brilliant!! The scond person reveal is excellent, can't wait for parts 2 and 3!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, is this for Kayleigh's challenge? I loved your story! Looking forward to reading the other 2 parts!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Oh bother. This is rather an inconvenient truth.

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