The Fall
A Story of Humanity Micro
It’s cold. Also dark. Your legs are caught in twisted sheets. You’re awake, but not. You try untangling yourself.
Suddenly you’re toppling over the edge. The fall seems endless. You were pushed.
Who?
You look up.
The hands that shoved you and the eyes looking into yours are your own.
Author's Note:
I wrote a trio of second person micros that are distinct stories but connected in their thematic progression. If you're interested, check out the other two linked below:
1. The Fall
2. The Wait
3. The Hope
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.
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Comments (7)
Haunting last line D.K. This feels like a commentary on how humans have sealed their own fate perhaps? The title immediately makes me think of Adam and Eve and Paradise Lost etc.
The final line is captivating. It really leaves you wanting more.
Fabulous finish to this micro fiction 🤩
This is my favourite of the three 😇🤍
Brilliant!! The scond person reveal is excellent, can't wait for parts 2 and 3!
Oooo, is this for Kayleigh's challenge? I loved your story! Looking forward to reading the other 2 parts!
Oh bother. This is rather an inconvenient truth.