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The Awakening Prayer

A Tale of Faith Tested in the Night's Darkest Hour

By Feetish MePublished 12 days ago 2 min read
The Awakening Prayer
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In the quiet suburbs of a small town, Mark had recently started attending church, finding solace and guidance in the teachings of Jesus. Raised in a non-religious household, the newfound faith was a journey for him, filled with curiosity and apprehension.

As Mark delved deeper into his spiritual exploration, strange occurrences began to unfold. One night, as he drifted into sleep on his waterbed, he felt a sudden weight pressing down on him, rendering him immobile. Panic surged through his veins as a hoarse voice whispered chillingly, "I am coming..."

Unable to move, Mark's heart raced, feeling the ominous presence drawing closer. The sensation of movement beside him on the waterbed sent shivers down his spine, his mind reeling with fear.

Desperate for escape, Mark tried to will himself awake, but his body remained paralyzed, trapped in the grip of terror. Frantically, he recited prayers, each word a plea for divine intervention, but the darkness persisted, suffocating and relentless.

In the depths of his subconscious, a whisper echoed, a reminder from his girlfriend about the power of invoking Jesus' name in times of distress. Clutching onto this lifeline, Mark cried out, "Jesus! Jesus! Jesus!", his voice a fervent prayer amidst the chaos.

Suddenly, like a bolt of lightning piercing through the darkness, a surge of light flooded Mark's consciousness. With a gasp, he jolted awake, his body drenched in sweat, heart still pounding with the remnants of fear.

As dawn broke on the horizon, Mark lay awake, grappling with the vividness of his ordeal. Yet, amidst the lingering shadows of uncertainty, a newfound strength emerged within him – a faith emboldened by the knowledge that even in the darkest of nights, the name of Jesus was a beacon of hope, guiding him back to the light.

With each passing day, Mark's journey with Jesus took on a deeper resonance, his heart steadfast in the belief that no darkness could prevail against the power of faith and prayer. And as he stepped into the light of a new day, he carried with him the unshakeable truth that in moments of fear and uncertainty, the name of Jesus would always be his sanctuary, his refuge, and his salvation.

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Feetish Me

Mystery of any kind will trigger my interest fascination and setting me into deep thinking why and why not..are you like me too? Going wild with thoughts about whats real and whats not??

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