Revenge!
Fictional story written by Ankitaa Arun(Who else?of course its me)
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“Ugh!” Jake exclaimed with a feeling of boredom mixed with
sluggishness. He slammed onto the fluffy bed in his cluttered room
and slowly started to slide down with his face like a monkey. Tracey,
on the other hand, felt tedious too, but at least she was searching for
a quest that would pull them to the evergreen, but boring, secret
HQ! You can say that Jake turned cranky with the sound of his
horrible singing,“SHINE LIL’ GLOW WORM GLIMMER
GLIMMER…” Tracey’s face began to turn red, as Jake tickled her on
her last nerve. However, at the same time, Jake had given Tracey an
idea. A fabulous idea!
The idea lightning that Tracey was struck with needed a lot of
intrepidness. Between you and me, it needed a lot!! That idea included traveling to a glow worm pyramid
of a hundred tombs in far Egypt! Not just any tombs, but the
legendary Cleopatra and her servants’ tombs. Jake immediately
realized that the outcome of her idea was either ‘life’ or ‘no life’.
“PLEASE don’t tell me that we are going to experience another life-
threatening quest! Oh lord, save me from this unmerciful girl.” Jake
moaned, and when Tracey said “ PACK YOUR BAGS, CUZ’ WE’RE
GOING TO EGYPT!” Jack’s heart slumped into his boots like clock
weight. He couldn’t do anything, that’s for sure! Because Tracey was
the boss.
So, Jake lumbered off and returned with a jumbo suitcase which was
enough to fit an elephant! The two, fast as a flash, stuffed their bags
with food, food, food, and clothes.
Tracey marked her checklist and abruptly stopped upon the word
TRANSPORT! The duo rummaged through the vast internet but no
not a single vehicle was available, and since they were quite young,
the duo didn’t have much money to afford a flight to Egypt. Five
minutes later, the rather ‘exhausted two’ found themselves on the
….ROAD! Tracey discovered herself listening to Jake’s useless
moans, again. “Oh Jesus, what sin did I commit to deserve this
painful torture? After a couple more lines of his moaning and
groaning, a glossy, red Chevrolet approached the two as their
dropping jaws echoed in the quiet, burning weather. But here’s the
but, the vehicle had no driver! Yes, they were shocked but they also
were tired so without a word the two barged in. Whilst Jake buckled
into the driver’s seat Tracey shot a gazillion questions to him. “Do
you know how to drive? Do you have a license?
Do you? How? What? When?”
With a short wink, Jake punched the accelerator as the car squealed
forward. “OFF TO EGYPT, WE GO!”
2 hours later, they finally set their eyes on the tall pyramid. Jake
barfed when he stumbled out and Tracey kissed the ground. The
dilapidated pyramid which contained the mummy of Cleopatra
stood in front of them, millimetres away. It was coated in dust from
the peak to the bottom. Tracey and Jake grabbed their torches and
made their way toward the humongous door. “Why would the brains
of people ever decide to build a door in one of the most horrifying
destinations?” Tracey asked Jake and Jake replied, “ Why would the
brains of two children ever decide to go to one of the most horrifying
destinations?” Tracey shot him a look and ignored his little useless
comment. With every single muscle they had, they pushed and
pushed and slammed the door open.
POOF! As soon as they entered, a massive stink plunged into their
noses. They ‘oofed’ and ‘ughed’ but continued to walk into the eerie
pyramid with terrified expressions.
A few seconds later, THUD THUD THUD! The two trembling heads
swung sideward as the tall door slammed shut. Tears flooded poor
Tracey’s face, but all her worries were replaced with bigger ones with
another THUD. “What in the world is going on? We can’t turn back
can we?” muttered Jake with terror. Thankfully but weirdly, lantern
fires switched on and the two timidly set forward.
They followed a mysterious pathway and ended up in front of
Mamba’s (Cleopatra’s servant) tomb. They told each other that it
was perfectly fine and that there were only two tombs but
immediately realized that they had spoken too soon. They squinted
their eyes to get the most out of the light they had and saw another
and another and a million more tombs! They concluded, after
counting, that this pyramid preserved the entire Egyptian era! Jake
turned pale without realizing the fact that his eyes started to water,
more like CRY! Without notice, those tears seeped into Mamba’s
coffin! All the lights started to flicker and smoke began to circle the
coffin. BLACK SMOKE! The long coffin which has been remained
closed for over a million year, bit by bit, opened as the two hearts
started to beat faster than ever. “YESS, FFREEEDOMMM….I
,MAMBAA,SSSERVVANTT OFF CLEOPTATRAA ISS NOWW THE
KINGG!”
Mamba’s voice echoed through the darkness. Tracey immediately
fainted and Jake, well had plan A … to RUN but no plan B!
Jake nervously backed away, but he was helpless in the decision to
leave his friend behind. To his surprise, he spotted a long thin
thread. He scurried towards it and as soon as he got it, he tied it
around his and Tracey’s leg. To make things worse, flesh-eating lava
rushed for Jake and Tracey. Jake gulped and dashed towards the
door with Tracey tugging along. He banged with his fists turning red
from the pain. He kept turning back and forth to look out for the
monstrous lava. Second by second, the crackling lava neared the
entrance with Mamba floating on it! Except now it had a bigger
appetite.
Jake took a leap of faith pulled Tracey onto a nearby rock-which was
imprisoned just like them! BOOM! Without a warning, the door,
which stood for a decade, crashed due to the lava which melted its
base. ‘For once the lava was helpful’ thought Jake. With the chance
to escape, Jake rushed outside and shook Tracey off his leg.
Mamba, on the other hand, slithered out and stretched his limbs.
“UGH.YUCKY!” blurted Jake. He could never imagine a slimy
serpent stretching! When Mamba was done with his weird
stretching, he yelled “REVENGE….FOR THE PERSON WHO
IMPRISONED ME !”
“AAAAAAHHHHHH!” Tracey screamed. “What happened? Did we
get eaten? Are we in the snake’s belly?” Jake was clueless about
where to begin. But by the look on his face, Tracey could infer that
Mamba was quite ticked off! The two kids muttered “OH NO!”
The duo were helpless, literally! All they had in hands reach was an
old, rusted pan.
With no time to lose, Jake grabbed the pan at lightning speed, and
with great cautiousness, he crushed every serpent-that came to life
with the lava- that met his eye. While this was on, Tracey distracted
Mamba by lumbering towards him as if she were a zombie. Fear
could be detected in Mamba’s eyes as she neared. But why?
Once every serpent was killed, Mamba was the only one left to get
his butt whacked. Jake and Tracey cornered him and recalled his
weakness. “ Jake, when I went closer to him a few moments ago,
Mamba got scared and backed away. I think if we get near him he
will turn to ash!” Tracey explained. The two nodded in agreement
and sprinted toward Mamba to end this huge dilemma. Once they
got too close, their breath gently touched Mamba’s fiery face. Slowly,
his body froze and withered like a flower.
“YES!” they screamed. Mamba was destroyed!
They had finished another adventure and they both had an
outstanding story to narrate!
Do you think you can be brave like Jake and Tracey? Tell me in the comments!
About the Creator
Ankitaa Arun
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Comments (1)
Sweet!