A thick fog rolled over the dense wood, twisting in between the trees, as if it were snakes searching for prey. Touching each leaf and stone, discarding droplets of icy cold water on every surface or touched. These veins of cool mist slithered to a clearing, where they wrapped around a small shack.
The shack sat alone, no other structure for miles, nothing but the woods. The fog surrounded this shack at all times, no matter the weather outside the wood. The wooden walls of the shack groaned in the still, otherwise silent clearing. A dim blue light glowed from between the boards.
Inside, crudely built furniture was pressed against the walls. A bed, a small table with a stool, and an uneven bookshelf. The bookshelf held no actual books, only some odds and ends one could find in the woods - oddly shaped rocks, bits of dried wood, and such. Scraps of cloth stuffed between the wall boards closest the bed in an attempt to contain some of the warmth. On this bed huddled a small figure, wrapped in loose fitting clothes, and shivering. This is May.
Comments (2)
Instead of writing "or touched", it may read better as "it touched" I knew you would be a good writer. Keep it up!
This is a fantastic introduction to what I hope will be an amazing adventure.