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For Real Poetic's Holiday Jamboree! Challenge
My dearest Catherine,
My love, I hope you are well and safe this Christmas, for it’s a glorious Christmas night here as I sit penning this letter to you. While I dream of being with you and the children at the lake, sitting beside the fire, drinking wine with you as William and Mary play at our feet, there are things happening here in Trenton, and it’s a dream that I do not dare dream, for it makes what comes next that much harder.
Today was a glorious day, one of such majesty I dare say they will be singing its triumphs for Christmases to come. They said the cause was over, but today, through what must be a certain amount of divine intervention, I believe our righteous cause renewed with a force of will hitherto incomprehensible.
I was awoken suddenly on this frosty morning by the thumping of the cannons, a veritable cacophony of violence that, I must admit, gave me quite a start. Steeling myself, knowing that you and the children were safe, I sat near that little window upstairs. Don’t fret–I had my musket handy and watched them gloriously sweep through the streets.
But it was not the glory of the guns that stirred my soul more fiercely than I could ever have imagined. Nay, It was him.
Taller than a territorial oak, he rode at their head, bellowing, "March on, my brave fellows, after me!"
Despite the swirling rumors of their ruggedness, Washington and his army rode with such passion and bravery that any notions of their inevitable defeat I held shattered.
Not even the Sunday preacher could match his authority. Tomorrow, I will go to enlist in the Continental Army and join in this great struggle.
I pray for you and the children.
Yours,
George
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Congratulations on the win. This is still one of my favorite mini stories.
Great Top Story! Poor Catherine, William and Mary!
Poignant micro Matthew! Congratulations! I’ve been working on a series of Letters Home and really enjoyed yours. Now I may park it. My idea was letters from soldiers to home or home to soldiers 1780, 1812, 1861, 1917, 1941, 1967, 1991, 2001, and present day.
Missed this one, sorry! Congrats on tops story. Such a poignant well written piece. Enjoyed the EME voice immensely 🤍
Congratulations on your top story. Very well written indeed. Subscribed!
Historical fiction is one of my favorite genres. Well done and congratulations on TS.
This is a great story. I enjoyed this story. If you want to read my story then visit this link https://vocal.media/humans/a-symphony-of-hearts-and-hopes
What a fascinating story!!! Excellent work Matthew!!!
Loved this - congratulations on your Top Story!
Bravo!! Congratulations on Top Story too!!!💕❤️❤️
Back to say congratulations. This one was so deserving
So so good, Matthew! Well done. Congrats on top story, friend.
This is just magical! Truly wonderful writing. Flows so well. Congrats on Top Story.
This is penned with passion. It is a fitting tribute to a profound chapter in American history. Well done!
Outstanding! Keep striving for greatness—congratulations!
You love history and it shows. This had a very transcendent quality to it. Your dive into of the mind of a past hero was very believable. Excellent work!!! And congrats!!!
Ohhh this is so compelling and immersive, Matthew! Just, so well done! This bit really got me: "Not even the Sunday preacher could match his authority. Tomorrow, I will go to enlist in the Continental Army and join in this great struggle." Damn. What a pay-off from the first paragraph. Congrats on TS too!
I could imagine such a letter written by Washington.
Ooutstanding job, Matthew. Congratulations on Top Story!
Congrats on the TS.
Oooof the sweet letter and the dagger of a title 😩❤️ so good!!!!
Great job on this and great take on the challenge.
Creative twist on the challenge. Excellent Matthew! 😊👏
The title says it all, you wrote the part that needed to be read. Great job
Poor George. Your title hit me hard. Loved your take on this challenge!