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Dragon Scales

In a place where the economy rests on the sloughings of a fire-breathing reptile, little children are sent right to its jaws to keep the world turning.

By L.C. SchäferPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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Dragon Scales
Photo by Lahiru Supunchandra on Unsplash

Each evening, after sunset, the children were sent to the lake to collect dragon scales.

Grown-ups would be incinerated on the spot. None knew - yet - why the little ones could approach and make the precious harvest.

Night thickened. The children went home. But one little girl, enthralled by a honeyed song in her brain, stepped closer to the Lair, finally sinking into blissful sleep curled around a huge pearlescent egg.

She woke to a world cramped, sticky and dark. She tapped. The world cracked. Her snout flooded with the scent of fresh meat, conveniently draped across the shell-fragments.

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Thank you for reading 😁 Please do leave a comment so I can reciprocate. I welcome feedback. If something pulled you out of the story - a typo, too much purple prose - I want to know!

If you are interested in the story behind the story: I'm not sharing my inspiration for this one, but feel free to guess!

This is my 11th entry in the Microfiction Magic challenge. You can read more about Vocal challenges here.

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L.C. Schäfer

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  • Alexander McEvoy7 months ago

    Oh that was awesome! Totally did not expect that ending!! Always wondered how baby dragons happened, since they're usually such solitary creatures. I guess now we know :)

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Oh, this is great. The ending gave me a chill. Well done.

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Splendid!!!💖💖💕

  • Great fantasy take on the challenge

  • Donna Fox (HKB)12 months ago

    L.C........ is that dragon going to eat the little girl?... I need to know. Actually don't tell me... But also I need to know... 😳 Also, this story was amazing, thrilling and curious. I love the seamless change in perspective and narrator! Very well done!

  • J. S. Wade12 months ago

    Great story. You have mastered the micro fiction! 😃

  • Roy Stevens12 months ago

    '(E)nthralled by a honeyed song in her brain'- simply gorgeous!

  • Dana Stewart12 months ago

    Great concept, leaves me wanting to read more!

  • Stephanie Downard12 months ago

    This is a good one! Fantastic job! I am intrigued by the inspiration, lol

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