Doing me, Caribbean style
A fictional poem/song/story, written for a Challenge.
I stand in obscured uncertainty by the exit point of my old life
Awaiting my entry into a new beginning to a new rebirth of ME
Feeling tied and tangled up, Black strings entwine and squeeze
New in town, unsure where to begin my new, yet old, adventure
Nappy hair naturally styled, rounded nose, curious eyes agog
Cheekbones to die for, pouty lips opened in awe of Paradise
The bright sunshine of the Caribbean Island beckons a newness
A renaissance of living eagerly awaiting, arms opened to discovery
An old chapter in my life's book had closed it's tumultuous door
The need for a new beginning waited with bated breath to align
Over there he stands, he too has strings, but strings of.... Green
Are you like me? That conundrum which is wrapped inside a riddle
A riddle made up of many strings: laughter, tears, hurtful strings
Happy, wonderful, grateful, ungrateful, thankful, beautiful strings
I cannot fathom the answer, so I squirm, bend and twist
Hello you, yes you, standing all alone over there. Do you see me
Are my strings as visible to you, as yours are to me
I see you, watching me, you too are tied in strings of green
Unlike mine though, yours are confident and shines bright
People pass by and stare at me, they cross the street in fear of
The woman entangled in tattered black unfathomable strings
Do they hurt? The curious child asks, innocent eyes upturned
The strings seem so thin and taut, can we help her to untie them
I can see right through her, is she real momma?
Can you though, little one....
Really see through my stringed pneuma
My virtual spirit, soul and creative force within
Deep, underneath the outer facade of my earthly strings
Turmoil, need, longing, love, lust, greed and promise
All vie for their rightful place within my inner psyche
Demanding the right to all be free, individually, together
Or wrapped in passionate embraces with each other
The child ponders, having the kindest of faces
Yes! They hurt, they slice and they sting, they bend and break me
They bring a whole world of hurt and pain everywhere deep within me
Yet there are those days when they make me sing such happy songs
The child smiles. Her eyes reflecting wisdom far beyond her years
She nods me goodbye, taking her disapproving mother's hand
A wise one that little one, she will eventually lead a nation
I settle my strings, in dire need of comfort and ease
Every day they become a little less taut and binding
Everyday more pieces unravel, take off with the gusts of winds
Every day my mind reaches deeper, seeking a higher plane
Observing, learning, simulating, stimulating...reaching
Eventually taking my soul to it's rightful calm and peaceful Zen!
As I turn to leave, you stride purposefully towards me, smiling
I keep walking, unsure if towards me is your intended destination
You overtake me. Such a kind face you have, not too handsome
Just totally and completely perfect in my imaginative spectrum
"Hello, are you new in town? You seem a little overwhelmed
May I be of assistance"? He looks me directly in the eyes
Honesty exuding from every pore and sinew of his being
I am so captivated, there is loss of speech. Say something!
"I saw you looking at the map, so I just assumed you are new here
Hope I am not being too presumptuous"! The green strings they
Shone so bright, they hurt my eyes. I found my voice
"Um, I'm.....Thank you for asking. But, who are you. Sorry, I don't mean
To be rude". He laughs out loud. A most wonderful thrill of sounds
"No worries. My name is Firash?". African name, Caribbean accent
Later I google your name. Meaning: Perceptiveness and Ingenuity
"I would offer to help with your luggage, but you might get the wrong idea,
Think that I have bad intentions towards you. I have only good ones".
Perceptive you are indeed. You read my thoughts!
"May I walk along with you. Point out important places and things"?
My strings are unravelling really fast. Too fast for comfort. Steady. Breathe
"Sure, you can walk along with me. What are your intentions by the way"?
He laughs again. That endearing quality to his tone. I like him. Oh dear!
"I would like to buy you lunch, or dinner, or we could just walk to the beach
It is not too far. I am parked over there, but I am not trying to kidnap you
So we should walk, if you so desire. We could sit and talk for a while, or
Do you wish to go home and we could meet later
I would like to see you again quite soon". This keeps getting better
I glance where he points. Nice car, not too flashy. Good for him
The wind takes the strings as they fall away. I can feel my face, my neck
My arms, my body. Some strings are clinging steadily to me. Still Unsure
That is ok. They are only protecting me from my former self's insecurities
We walk to the beach. The scenery is wonderfully breathtaking. Tropical
We pass by a virtual panorama of fruit and foods Caribbean style
Exotic plants, trees, people, and water so blue you want to jump in
Wash all your troubles away. Emerge cleansed and perfectly refreshed
He helped me purchase a new phone. Numbers are exchanged, taxi called
Home to rest and recharge. Later we will meet at the restaurant in my hotel
We will meet on my terms, safety and common sense bids one go slowly
Dinner, talk, dancing, light drink and intelligent conversation. Great night
Beach. Sightseeing. Moonlit walks. Both single and open to whatever
Like poles attract, unlike poles repel! Where did I hear that? School?
"When the north pole of one magnet is close to a north pole of another magnet, they repel each other. Like poles repel. However, if a north pole of one magnet is near the south pole of another magnet, they are drawn together. This is because opposite poles attract".
Confusing. Whatever the poles, we have definitely attracted each other
Two weeks later all is well with the world. Do not jinx yourself. Live
Love, laugh. Be happy. See where life takes you. Be careful.......
What about the strings you ask. A few remain intact, still protecting me
They are stubborn. I understand. Most have flown away with the wind
On him I see only the color blue now. Peace and calm abounds
Chance meetings, or preordained? Just embrace your gift of life whenever it presents itself.
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Another one of your great works! I love the message behind it all and your last line! "Just embrace your gift of life whenever it presents itself."