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Disillusioned Feelings

Fake Love Breaks Real Hearts

By Thavien YliasterPublished 2 months ago 2 min read
Disillusioned Feelings
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"I said NO, and that's FINAL!"

"But DaaaAAD!"

"Morwenna, stop arguing."

"Why can't I just-!"

"To. Your. Room. Young lady."

Storming off, she slammed her bedroom door.

"Enough, Poseidon."

He sighed, "Why does she have to be so stubborn, Amphitrite?"

"She's incompressible like water, capable of taking the pressure and applying it."

"I just wanna keep her safe."

"Yeah, but she's going to learn about boys one way or another. I'd rather her do it under our watchful eyes instead of sneaking away like vapor that's missed."

"I'm just afraid that one of them will break her heart. She's my little baby girl. I love her and I know what those boys only want from her."

"Now, now, " she hugged him, "you were one of those boys too. I'm somebody's little baby girl, and look at how well we turned out."

"Yeah, but I'm afraid that they'll just shuck her clam, tossing her shell aside for the hermit crabs."

"Don't worry, dear. With us by her side, we'll help her land a good one."

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Popping open tabs faster than they could load, Morwenna tapped thumbnails, glimpsing for the perfect video whilst 'riding the wave.'

No stranger to her body's natural rhythm, she kept on 'surfing.' Then, something appeared in her recommended list.

"Oh my gosh, Benjamin Dover's new vid! Eeee! Can't wait! Oooo, and it's an interesting POV!" She's been consuming his stuff for months on end, even losing so much sleep that the sun would rise without catching a wink. It was as if his physique was forged from Apollo's fires in Hephaestus' forge, enough to make Adonis jealous.

"Hey there cutie," His smooth, swaggering, voice cooed in her ear drums, swelling her arousal, "wha'daya say we spice things up a bit?"

"Oh Benjy, yes..."

"Good girlll," the POV displayed him latching handcuffs onto the bed frame, "now you just wait here..."


"As I..."


"Fuck. Your. Best. Friend."


"Enjoy the show, cuckie," he chuckled deviously.

Her lips trembled, her 'wave crashed.' She sang the saddest song that tragically graced her family's ears.

Rushing upstairs, Poseidon busted the door, finding her melted into seafoam.

"Morwenna!" He howled before melting, "MY LITTLE MERMAID!"

Thavien's Token: This story is crafted for L.C. Schäfer's "Fucked Up Fairytales - An Unofficial Challenge."

Stream of ConsciousnessYoung AdultShort StorySatirePsychologicalMicrofictionHumorFantasyFableClassical

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.



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Comments (5)

  • Christy Munson22 days ago

    Fascinating take on L.C.'s f'd up fairytales!

  • Catsidhe30 days ago

    Interesting modernization of the story. The internet can be a scary place.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 months ago

    Well, that was a lesson in parenting I needed to know... :)

  • Only recently I learned of cuck and lol, that part made me laugh 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    Might have been healthier to let her go out!

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