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Agonventis

A scream that comes from such intense emotional pain that splinters of soul are released with it.

By THE SPEAR SISTERSPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in the Neolomicro Challenge
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The Wielder needed one last ingredient for her potion. A decade ago, when the Cradle’s Plague had swept the kingdom, it had been so common, she could scrape it off nearly any wind. She knew it was often found around battlefields, but the kingdom wasn’t currently at war.

She had sent her crow to scout. She heard the flap of its black wings returning. It had found something. She leapt onto her horse and followed the crow through the woods.

It led her to where a woman was crying over the body of a stag, an arrow pierced in its side. The Wielder recognized the stag.

A wealthy Duchess had bought a curse from her just days before. Seeking her revenge on a man who she said had slighted her, the Duchess had sought to turn him into an animal.

The Wielder recognized the woman too. She had met her when she delivered the Duchess’ curse. She was the man’s wife.

The Wielder watched the stag draw his last breath then go still, his dead body transforming back into the man he had been.

The Wielder then heard what she was waiting for… the reason she was there…

An agonventis pierced the air as it tore out of the distraught woman’s lungs.

An agonventis isn’t something a normal person can bottle, but the Wielder wasn’t a normal person. She was a Dark Sorceress and an agonventis was the last ingredient she needed to wield her next curse.

Fantasy
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About the Creator

THE SPEAR SISTERS

Kailey and Sam Spear are film & TV director/writer/actors (and twin sisters) originally from Nex̱wlélex̱m, Bowen Island, Canada. Their passion lies in character-based genre, particularly world building in fantasy and sci-fi.

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  • D.K. Shepard5 months ago

    Brilliant! Loved reading this! Great job pulling me into an entire realm in such a short story!

  • Alison McBain5 months ago

    Creepy… I want to know more about the wielder.

  • Alexander McEvoy6 months ago

    WOW! Super dark Beautifully Witchy I could feel the pain in that exact scream despite having never (thankfully) felt it! AWESOME WORK!

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