A Storm Blows In
A microfiction piece for my "Writing Prompts of October" Challenge
This was written in inspiration of my child's newfound fear of tornados. I hope you enjoy reading this.
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As a storm began to blow in, the young family began preparations. A tornado warning was in effect for their small town.
Windows shut. Check.
Hiding place secured. Check.
Snacks acquired. Check.
The wind began howling such a mournful sound. A flash of lightning shocked me straight to the core. We rushed the kids into the basement with some books for company, just in case the power suddenly went out. Breaking into a bag of chips, my five-year old began asking a bunch of questions.
"When is this going to be over Mom?"
I replied slowly, "I don't know buddy, we just have to ride the storm out."
My husband grabbed my hand and gently said the words, "It's just a few rainclouds." Oh was he wrong.
The wind began to howl louder and louder. The house shook from the storm's rage. The kids were terrified as we could hear the picture frames on the walls start falling. Smash.
Smiling wearily, "It will be over soon guys. Don't worry."
The howling noises grew. We were safe in the basement. I was just as terrified as they were but at least we all had each other.
All of a sudden, the wind stopped. My son looked at me bright eyed, "Is it over?"
My husband replied to him while giving me a firm look, "Not until the storm warning shuts off."
He frowned. "But the noise is gone!"
I handed him another juice box. "Here buddy, why don't you colour me another picture."
With a bang, it sounded like the lightning struck something near our house. We were in the eye of the storm and my husband knew it too. My kids covered their ears as another round of thunder began rumbling.
"It's okay kids, it will all be over soon."
Chloe Rose Violet🌹
I wrote this as a part of my "Writing Prompts for October Challenge" which you can view down below.
I have read a few people's posts in regards to this writing prompt challenge and I'd love to see some more!
Please feel free to comment on the original post or this one to make sure I see it as I will be picking my favourites from the month of October. I was hoping to find one for every prompt. Do one or do them all! Thanks for reading everyone.
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Chloe Rose Violet 🌹
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Comments (12)
Well done. It must be scary as hell for a kid to go through this. Congrats on the Top Story.
Tornadoes are terrifying!
Cant see middle part
Intense and creepy, but with some heartwarming words sprinkled in. Deserving of top story, congrats!
This was a wonderful and intense story! I love the way you built the plot/ scenery and how you pulled us into the setting with you! Great work and congratulations on Top Story!
Congratulations on TS status. GREAT story and very, very real. I was never in a tornado but I lived through (by hunkering in my closet) hurricane Charley - one mph lower than a Cat 5 storm. The house shook, pictures fell off walls, our pool screening broke loose from their bolts and blew off the back concrete porch. Our boat landed capsized in the canal, even though we had it strapped down. I could go on and on but your story definitely hits home with its accuracy. BRAVO
Congratulations, straight from Tornado Alley! Great job, Chloe!
Congratulations on your Top Story, well deserved Chloe Rose
Nicely written
Very good dear
This is just so terrifying! I've never experienced this before and would never want to!
Well Written My Dear