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The House

A Giver and Taker of Life

By Syed Omar HussainPublished 10 months ago 3 min read
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This is the story of a house built by an Engineer for his beloved family in the city of Lahore, Pakistan. A large family of 15 members was to take residence in it and eventually after completion, they moved in. The move was not entirely very difficult as they were living in the neighboring house. So one fine day, all of the family packed their belongings and shifted very quietly and peacefully.

At first, the house was full of joy and love. The family's laughter and the sound of children running around made it a warm and happy place. However, the family didn't know that the house was built on a piece of land with a mysterious past. According to local stories, it was once a graveyard..

Strange things started happening in the house. Belongings would disappear without explanation, only to reappear when asked for gently. These occurrences seemed harmless at first, but they started to escalate, revealing a malevolent force within the walls.

During the nights, the family could hear the eerie sound of chains dragging across the floors, accompanied by faint cries that sent shivers down their spines. It felt as if the house itself was haunted, connected to the spirits from the old burial ground. The irony was that only a few members of the family would hear the creepy sounds in the night and some members had no clue of the proceedings.

In an attempt to ease the unsettling atmosphere, the family turned to their faith. They performed religious rituals and prayers in the hope of appeasing whatever unseen entity lurked within the house. But their efforts were in vain, as the malevolent presence only grew stronger, casting a dark shadow over their lives.

First, the father passed away suddenly, leaving an irreplaceable void in their hearts. The family held onto each other for support, but the house seemed to crave more sorrow.

The grandmother, who was the matriarch of the family, fell ill to a mysterious sickness and passed away. After her, an aunt followed, and then the mother—the heart and soul of the household. Each loss left the family devastated, facing a void they thought they could never fill.

The house that once brimmed with life and love now stood as a sad reminder of the family's struggles. The once lively rooms were now silent, bearing the weight of their absence. It was then that the family made the difficult decision to leave the house, seeking refuge elsewhere to escape the malevolent presence that had plagued their lives for too long.

The house was left empty and abandoned, becoming a ghostly monument to the unseen forces that can affect our lives. The neighborhood began to share stories of the house, warning others of its mysterious and unsettling nature.

Years passed, and the vacant house remained as a silent witness to the family's tragic legacy. Eventually, it was decided that the house should be demolished, releasing the souls that may have been trapped within its walls.

The house, which had once provided shelter, ultimately consumed the family with sorrow and darkness. Its tale remains etched into the memories of those who encountered its ominous presence, a reminder of the unknown and unseen forces that can shape our lives in unimaginable ways.

As the remnants of the house were cleared away, the neighborhood felt a sense of relief. Though the scars of its existence might always linger, the chapter had closed, ending the darkness that had cast a long shadow over the lives it had touched.

Through the passage of time, the story of the house lives on—a haunting narrative that serves as a reminder of the delicate balance between the tangible and the supernatural. It cautions us to be mindful of the unknown and to respect the forces that may influence our lives in ways we may never fully understand.

The truth is that the surviving members moved on with their lives and some forgot about the house. Maybe some members assumed thats life took its natural course, but the individuals that understood the deeper meaning of the events, still ponder on the losses they incurred and how it shaped their lives. As if it was meant to be this way…

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About the Creator

Syed Omar Hussain

Syed Omar Hussain, a multifaceted talent—a writer, poet, musician, farmer, and a textile engineer.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCKTpuZgA1Edh4tX-TLMDirQ

www.linkedin.com/in/syedomarhussain

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  • Judey Kalchik 10 months ago

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