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Stories in Critique that you’ll love, handpicked by our team.
Bridget Jones’s Diary
Bridget Jones had a red diary. She was seeking true love between Mark Darcy, a politician and Daniel Cleaver, her boss. Bridget’s story was about sex and a series of embarrassing humor.
Mariann CarrollPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueInconsequential Woman
I am an inconsequential woman. I lurk in the shadows, a note flung in your trash, alien scent on your shirt, trophy lace in the back of your drawer.
Teresa RentonPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueHigher Beings
Looking for some brutally honest feedback. I know there is a lot wrong with this, but after three edits I'm not sure how I can improve it further.
Mack DevlinPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueA Review, Before My Next 100
This article is my 100th ‘story’ on Vocal, so I think it’s a good point to stop and reflect, before I move on. This community came at a perfect time!
Mohammed DarasiPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueSun & Sand
Evan Forrester stalked up the beach and to the beachside bar at least six steps ahead of Katie. This left plenty of room for people to not believe that they were a pair and those people innocently cut in between the two people as groups either made their ways back to the beach or up to the bar as well. A few of them were kind enough to mumble “excuse me” or “pardon me.” No one hung back and allowed her to catch back up with Evan; no one knew about the infractions that they were committing. No; it was the young group of college aged males who knowingly and indiscreetly stared at her to size her up that really bothered the brunette beauty. Had it been in her nature, she might have flipped them off. Today, she was dangerously close to that being in her nature.
Kent BrindleyPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueRequest for Critique
Well, I'll be honest when I say that I have no idea how this community is supposed to work. So, here is a foray into the unknown!
Matthew FrommPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueTownies [Draft]
Townie (noun): an individual who has grown up and spent most of their life on Cape Cod. "What the fuck are you looking at?" Kenny yelled, blaring on the horn of his beat-up station wagon as a white, pristine, clean BMW X5 pulled out in front of him, unexpectedly. Kenny flipped the driver the bird before proceeding to ride his ass.
Ashley LimaPublished 10 months ago in Critique