Fiction
“Echoes of insight”
Settled in a curious town lined by moving slopes and murmuring streams, there carried on with a youthful essayist named Emily. She had forever been enamored by the force of words, winding around stories that moved perusers to far away grounds and contacted the profundities of their souls. In any case, Emily knew that to genuinely sharpen her art, she wanted the direction and criticism of individual essayists.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 10 days ago in Critique"The Styx Saga,"
Some time ago, in a domain where inventiveness streamed like waterways and creative mind exceeded all logical limitations, there existed a spot called Styx. It was a land where hopeful makers and specialists set out on an excursion to create their works of art, looking for criticism and direction en route.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 10 days ago in Critique"The Typewriter's Legacy,"
Some time ago, in a comfortable loft settled on an old Victorian house, there lived a failed to remember remnant of a past period — a typewriter. It sat upon a dusty work area, its keys covered in recollections of when words were made with ink and paper. The typewriter had seen many years of stories unfurl, yet it held one story near its heart — the tale of its own inheritance.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 10 days ago in Critique"The Invisible Cell,"
Sometime in the distant past, in a little town settled among moving slopes and murmuring streams, there carried on with a young lady named Lily. Since early on, Lily had felt the heaviness of assumptions pushing down on her. Her folks, while benevolent, fantasized seeing Lily become an effective specialist like her dad or a legal counselor like her mom. They accepted these callings would carry distinction and monetary dependability to their loved ones.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 10 days ago in CritiqueZequarion
Chapter I The woods were one of the very few places that weren't under the jurisdiction of the drow elves. Hazel had always been curious about them. She knew that they were dangerous, of course, but her curiosity overpowered her voice of reason.
The Taliban's Plan To Rule the World
While the turmoil seems to never end in the Middle East, the idea of the return of Al-Qaeda is getting more and more popular, since such a group has a historical ties with the Taliban that reached power in Afghanist in 2021. The dire situation that spells out the fate of the Afghan citizens in Taliban's regime rule hangs in the air with it bringing to mind the global setting of the day regardless of the distance.
Amine OubihPublished 14 days ago in CritiqueFeedback Needed!!!!!
I need some help with my blurb! What do you guys think? I know it's kinda long, but I'm trying to give a broad overview of what my book is about. However, I'm willing to gut what seems unnecessary. The book is a blend of sci-fi and fantasy (more sci-fi). Those who love Zodiac Academy by Caroline Peckam will definitely enjoy this. (Okay, I'm a little biased.)
Birthright
Nora Roberts has written 'Birthright' the story of Callie Dunbrook aka Jessica Cullen a woman who was kidnapped and adopted illegally. Callie is an anthropologist who is the head of an archeological dig in a small town and at the same time learns that she may be the daughter of another woman other than the mother that raised her. Nora Roberts does show and tell her stories and with this one you can see the details of the dig along with all the events that she creates for Callie and all involved. You will feel for Callie, the mothers and fathers, and even Callie's friends.
Mark GrahamPublished 18 days ago in CritiqueThe Attic
There is an old house that sits in the middle of the town of Mare. There are rumors that it is haunted by a witch or whatever in the attic. There has been various families who have tried to live there, but it seems that when it comes to going up the stairs into the attic to find something an eerie feeling comes over a person, but curiosity of the person takes over. The person looks around the dusty place and looks around and everything seems just like it should in an old attic and one thinks if it's cleaned up it would make a good study or something else and then something else happens. The person feels like they are being pulled into a dark corner and the more they try to move away from the force the person feels that they should try harder to make it back to the stairs that led to the attic and this feeling that something wants or needs to do something in this attic subsides till another day when that curiosity returns and back up the stairs to the attic and the person with broom in hand starts to sweep up the dust and cobwebs. That eerie feeling returns, and the person feels like someone, or thing is watching just minding their time till a decision is made. No one has ever completely cleaned that old attic for the fear that seems to take over to escape happens, but it seems there is always someone will return and find out what that eerie feeling is all about.
Mark GrahamPublished 19 days ago in CritiqueWhat happens if there is no SUN?
If the Sun were to disappear suddenly, the consequences for Earth and its inhabitants would be profound and catastrophic. As the closest star to our planet, the Sun's radiant energy sustains all life as we know it. Its light and warmth provide the necessary conditions for the development and sustenance of living organisms, from the smallest microbes to complex ecosystems. However, the sudden absence of the Sun would plunge the Earth into darkness and cold, triggering a series of devastating events.
Angel Ann SajuPublished 27 days ago in CritiqueWhat happens when we die?
What happens when we die? This question, perhaps more than any other, encapsulates the essence of human curiosity, fear, and wonder. It is a question that has intrigued philosophers, theologians, scientists, and everyday individuals throughout the ages. Yet, despite millennia of contemplation and exploration, the mystery of what lies beyond the threshold of death remains elusive, shrouded in ambiguity and speculation.
Angel Ann SajuPublished 29 days ago in CritiqueThe Art of Constructive Critique: How to Provide Feedback That Inspires Growth
Constructive critique is an art form that can inspire growth and development in individuals, teams, and organizations. Providing feedback in a constructive manner requires skill, empathy, and a focus on improvement rather than criticism. In this article, we will explore the principles of constructive critique and provide practical tips on how to deliver feedback that fosters growth.
BLESSING COOLPublished about a month ago in Critique