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Artist's story poem
Who and what are artists? Do you draw, write, sing or take pictures? Do you use a pen and paper or a computer or do use a paintbrush or sculptors' tool with clay or stone or musicians with their music whatever the style? An artist is one who can show an image in words or show through using various colors or other forms of media like a photograph. Artists are people who see people and things in a different light for how other 'regular' people see things. We share our stories in words as writers and images as artists and photographers and sculptors. We share our ideas and dreams with all who care and want to see and hear our work.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Captive Star
'Captive Star' a romance mystery novel written by Nora Roberts is the second in a series. This is a continuation of 'Hidden Star' but this is the story of MJ, a bartender/owner and Jack, a skip tracer and a misunderstanding of who is who and what needs to be done. Once again Nora Roberts has the reader visualizing the whole page-turning story.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Hidden Star
'Hidden Stars' is a romance mystery novel written by Nora Roberts and the first in series. This one is about Bailey who has lost her memory due to a serious intrusion and Cade a private detective who needs the job that leads to other things. Nora Roberts has written this page-turner of a story that the reader will feel for the couple involved in all respects till the end.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
A Kiss to Remember
'A Kiss to Remember' a short romance novel written by Naima Simone. This is the story of Remi and Declan two individuals that barely know each other and make a deal of sorts. This is truly a story of the 21st century for these two characters use text messaging throughout the story as friends, but it seems that something else is occurring. Naima is a descriptive writer so that the reader gets to know each of the characters from the major to the minor characters.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Once An Outlaw
Just finished 'Once an Outlaw' by Jill Gregory who wrote this historical fiction romance that kind of reminded me of 'Gunsmoke' as well as 'Little House on the Prairie' and even 'Bonanza'. This is the story of Clint Barclay and Emily Spoon who have to realize what family is and is not. Jill writes a story that is easy to visualize from how she describes the characters as well as the settings of the story. The reader will get the sense that they are back in history.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Dangerous
'Dangerous' written by Diana Palmer is a romance story, but there is a lot of family story too. This is the story of Winnie and Kilraven and the search for truth while working on a case of Kilraven's past and his dealing with losing one family and afraid to start another. This is a story of various emotions and how various relationships can affect one another. Diana Palmer has done her research well in developing these characters and what they do throughout the story.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Meatball's Snow Day
'Meatball's Snow Day' is a children's picture book created by Jen Willett. This is the story of a small mouse named Meatball and his duck friend finding a lot to do outside in the winter after it snowed. The pictures give one a cozy feeling when reading this story of friendship.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Walk with Me
'Walk with Me' is a children's picture book created by Stacey Tucker and Tonnja Kopp. This is a picture that takes the reader on a walk through the woods just enjoying the flora and fauna of nature. Tonnja Kopp's artwork is perfect for parents to show young children what nature has to offer that are pretty much realistic for drawn pictures. This would make a great book for right before naptime or going to bed to induce relaxation for there is a breathing exercise at the end of the book for adults and children.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Bedtime
'Bedtime' is a children's picture book created by Nanette Newman and Flora Daneman. In short this is a picture book for a bedtime routine for young children where a mother prepares her child to have pleasant dreams. The artwork that is done by Flora Daneman is like a dream that floats along with the words of Nanette Newman. 'Bedtime' is a very relaxing picture book that will help even adults to get a good nights sleep.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Bountiful Blessings
Here is a short critique on a book entitled 'Bountiful Blessings A Creative Devotional Experience created by Susie Larson and Carolyn Williams. This is a small coloring book that also offers short Bible verses and commentary dealing with various feelings. It is a quick read that could also help one find their purpose.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
Twelve Ordinary Men
'Twelve Ordinary Men' is an academic book written by John MacArthur. The subtitle to this work is 'How the Master Shaped His Disciples for Greatness, and What He Wants to Do with You.' This is a great book that lets the reader get to know the why the Lord chose these men and the special calling they all received. It is a book that is well-detailed with selected Bible verses at the beginning of each chapter. 'Twelve Ordinary Men' would make a great discussion book for bible studies or even a few college courses. One can learn a lot from the ordinary people then and now.
By Mark Graham3 years ago in Critique
