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Hey Avatar, someone wants her story back

Will the real Princess please stand up?

By Joe O’ConnorPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Hey Avatar, someone wants her story back
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So you were the highest-selling movie of all time huh?

I guess space + 3D = genius.

Those fancy glasses of yours made people miss the real crime. Not mining Ubh-310, but taking what isn’t yours. How appropriate that it’s called Pandora.

Blue isn’t the only colour of the wind.

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Joe O’Connor

New Zealander

English teacher

Short stories and poems📚

Please be honest- I would love your constructive feedback, as it's the only way I'll get better. Would rather it was pointed out so I can improve!

Currently writing James The Wonderer

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