A cornerstone of my childhood.
Despite the plot holes and controversies, this story is something that stays with me. When summer turns to autumn, I cross my fingers that an owl will swoop down with my Hogwarts acceptance letter. The letter never comes, so I settle with rewatching the movies.
About the Creator
Ashley Lima
I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Huge Potterfan here. I rewatch the series at least twice per year, but the first book and movie will forever be my favorite
Ravenclaw represent!
We all are still waiting for our letters. This was clever AF 😊
I've read all the books and watched all the movies! I'm a hugeeeee Potterhead! I get the controversies but there were plot holes?
A masterpiece. I love Harry Potter. I was 16 when first movie came out. Great critique
I feel so grateful for growing up with those characters. Best childhood ever!
I love your personal critique 😊. The atmosphere created by this book and then by the beautiful movie is unforgettable. I like the letter delivery too, along with platform 9 3/4 at the station!
I still have never seen or read a Harry Potter book or movie. I have friends who absolutely love both and look at me as though I am from another planet - lol. Love your critique and the personal connection.♥️
Love it❤️💯👌📝😉❗
great critique. spot on
Owl letter !! So cute! We can dream on! 💫☺️ Love the diversity of the critiques and that this one is personal Ashley.
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Haha yes true, that damn letter. Though I suppose in a way, the books are the letter, eh?