A Critique of Vocal
A Critique of Vocal For the Vocal 50 Word Challenge
Vocal is a platform for people to create and share their work and be rewarded for reads with bonuses as well as getting rewards for entering and succeeding in writing challenges.
This environment allows people to develop and improve their writing as well as them being given encouragement and support.
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Well said Mike. I still just hope more people will read my work and comment. Wish there was more ways to get bonuses. I will be posting two chapters of a textbook/reference book in a day or two.
glad to see you are being vocal about vocal -- I never used the platform to read others work until recently -- i found it was perfect to make me hone thoughts - nice to find a new way to use this new community that you gently introduce.
Brilliant - a critique of the platform asking us to critique! Also, well said.
congratulations
Excellent
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉
Congrats on top story. https://agileasia.com/blog
Thank yo everyone for these supportive comments
Quite clever Mike! Congrats on Top Story!
You’re correct brother! Good points and congratulations on top story
Well done , Mike. Congrats on Top Story
Congrats on Top Story. Way to break down the Fourth Wall;)
Bravo!!! Congratulations on Top Story too!!!♥️♥️💕
Vocal is also a creation based platform in which people are allowed to not just receive support, but provide it as well.
Congratulations on the top story!! 🎉🎉🎉
nice
Another one in the bag. Love this, straight forward funny
Thanks yo so much for all your compliments
But do you love it? 😁
Smart idea to critique vocal :p Congrats on top story!
Very clever idea to critique Vocal. Congratulations on Top Story!
Jeeze, Mike, go easy on them. They’re trying their best 😉
WHAT A GREAT CRITIQUE
Congrats on the TS.
Very true! Congrats, Mike :)