PI’s For Hire
The journey of Private Investigator Danny Marowski goes sideways when he’s lunged into a kidnapping case . Especially after connecting with old friend Chase Stinewall. Together things take a turn for the worst when the kidnapping isn’t the only thing afoot.
Opening Credits as the song **Keep On Loving You** by *REO Speedwagon* starts playing
INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT
Text pops up “1997”
We see an unknown person at first. They reach out and put on two black gloves. They then grab a pistol. The camera then shifts and shows the figure is Chase Stinewall. Text then pops up
“1997”
Chase then walks into the living room of the house. He walks over to the jukebox and turns the volume up louder to drown out the sounds of the person struggling that’s tied and gagged on a chair. Chase then aims the pistol at the man’s head. He pulls the trigger as it hard cuts to black as the music stops
CUT TO:
Jim and Brooks. They’re walking down a hotel hallway. Both dressed in casual clothes. Text pops up “2003”
INT. HOTEL HALLWAY - DAY
BROOKS
Remember the deal. We need him alive. We don’t know if this is our guy. We’re looking for Carlos, drug informant for us.
JIM
I don’t know what he looks like, I wasn’t given any information.
BROOKS
I know, just follow my lead.
Brooks knocks on the door
CARLOS
Who is it!?
BROOKS
Room service!
CARLOS
Hold on one minute!
The door then unlocks and Brooks pulls out his pistol and aims it at the guy
BROOKS
Back up into the room.
The man backs up and we see and bloodied and beaten man in the corner with his hands tied
Jim closes and locks the door as Brooks forces Carlos onto the bed
INT. HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Brooks and Jim both take out silencers and put them on their guns
BROOKS
Where’s our agent?
CARLOS
What?
the bloodied man speaks up
MITCH
Who are you guys?
He can barely get out
BROOKS
We’re FBI don’t worry, you’re safe now. Jim make sure he’s ok.
Jim goes over to the man and starts tending to his wounds
BROOKS
(Cont’d)
So... (Brooks sees a book on the bed) what’s this?
He goes to grab it and Carlos slightly moves. Brooks grabs him by the neck and puts the gun in his face
BROOKS
(Cont’d)
Don’t move! Flat on the fucking bed!
CARLOS
I’ve never seen that book in my life!
BROOKS
Well you’ve been looking at it all day.
CARLOS
You don’t know that.
BROOKS
Hands behind your back.
Carlos is hesitant
BROOKS
(Cont’d)
Now!
He lays flat on his stomach and puts his hands behind his back. Brooks cuffs him
BROOKS
(Cont’d)
Where’s the agent?
CARLOS
I don’t know what you’re talking about dude, I’m just a simple guy in a hotel room.!”
BROOKS
Explain the fucking dying man in the goddamn corner then!
Brooks says as he puts his gun to Carlos’s head
CARLOS
I don’t know!
BROOKS
That is where you are wrooong, you do know. What the fuck is going on?
JIM
I heard you knew about one of our agents going missing a few weeks ago his name was Carlos.
CARLOS
Carlos?
BROOKS
Carlos, my budddyyy!
JIM
He had contacts by the name of Jeremiah, his ex wife was Alicia and Carlos was very good friends with a man name Chad.
CARLOS
What’s your names?
BROOKS
I’m not gonna give you my name because you don’t deserve to know.
JIM
C’mon, Carlos worked for the cartel.
BROOKS
I get free tacos from Carlos!
CARLOS
Cartel? You think I know Carlos?
JIM
We know you know Carlos.
CARLOS
How do you know?
JIM
We got pictures of you guys all over.
Brooks grabs Carlos by the throat
BROOKS
Well we know you know Carlos. So I wanna know what you know about him.
CARLOS
Let me sit up and we can talk.
BROOKS
Sit up.
Carlos sits up
JIM
If you don’t tell what we wanna know we’re gonna have to use extreme measures.
CARLOS
What?
A phone goes off. It’s vibrating. Brooks looks and picks it up
BROOKS
Is this your phone?
CARLOS
Yeah that’s my phone.
BROOKS
Who the fuck is this calling?
He shows him the number and Carlos doesn’t budge
BROOKS
(Cont’d)
See that fan over there? If you don’t start talking in the next 10 fucking seconds. I’m gonna take the front off and shove those spinning blades in your fucking face. Do I make myself clear?
Carlos goes quiet
CARLOS
I don’t think the FBI’s like that..
BROOKS
We’re not FBI, we’re FBI agents.
Jim looks at Brooks a little confused but doesn’t say anything
CARLOS
Are you sure you guys are FBI?
Carlos is cut off
BROOKS
The FBI isn’t like that, but FBI agents are. See when one of our guys goes missing, they call in me.
CARLOS
So Carlos, he wanted to.
He’s cut off again by Brooks as Brooks grabs Carlos by the throat
BROOKS
He wanted!? He wanted to what? That’s past tense!
BROOKS
(Cont’d)
Restart the sentence and say he wants!
CARLOS
Carlos wants to get drugs.
Brooks rolls his eyes
JIM
Brooks.
BROOKS
What?
JIM
Can we talk for a minute? Outside the room?
BROOKS
Sure, where’s the keycard?
CARLOS
On the table.
Brooks grabs it and the two go to walk out
BROOKS
If I come in here and you’re out of those cuffs.
CARLOS
I get it!
BROOKS
Good.
Brooks and Jim walk out and Jim closes the door
JIM
Brooks, what the hell is going on here? I thought we were here for a sting operation?
BROOKS
Well, we weren’t being completely honest me and the chief... look... we needed someone green who didn’t know anything.
JIM
What’s going on?
BROOKS
I can’t tell you. Just follow my lead. Alright? When we get back me and the chief will explain. Let’s go back in.
CUT TO BLACK
CUT TO:
FBI agents Ricky and Jim. They’re in a hotel room. Both are geared up. Almost in military gear but not quite. It’s more casual. Jim takes a gun case out from under the bed
INT. HOTEL ROOM - DAY
RICKY
Y’know there’s a good chance we’re gonna die doing this right?
Camera turns to Jim as he lights the cigarette and takes a puff
JIM
Yeah I know...
Jim opens then gun case and inside is a unassembled machine gun. He takes it out and starts putting it together
HARD CUT TO BLACK:
BLANK SCREEN:
Police sirens fill the air. Heavy footsteps can be heard. Text pops up “6 months later”
CHIEF
(O/S)
Remember. If you go down, you go down. They can’t know the FBI was involved with this.
CUT TO: Agents Jim and Ricky along with another man named John bursting into a house as sirens blast. John is dragging a hostage with him. The owner is a lady and she screens at the site of them
INT. HOUSE - DAY
JIM
On the fucking ground now!
The lady gets down on the ground
JIM
(Cont’d)
Alright in here!
The 3 rush down some stairs as John drags the hostage with. John closes the door shut and throws the hostage down the stairs as he groans in pain. He locks the door
INT. BASEMENT - DAY
ALEX
Fuck, I can’t believe I did. Man, oh man. Fuck!
JIM
Calm down.
JOHN
Fuck! How are we gonna get out here? We gotta get out.
RICKY
Look around you. We’re in a basement. Where are we gonna go?
JOHN
Fuck... I don’t know, door?
RICKY
What?
JOHN
Fuck I don’t know!
JIM
Calm down! Everything’s fine.
JOHN
I’m not going down for this!
JIM
Calm down we still have him. We can get out ok.
John then notices the back room
JOHN
I got the back room filled with explosives. I’m not getting taken alive.
JIM
Where’s your detonator?
RICKY
Look, you’re talking out of your ass. You’re stressed and panicked. Calm down and everything will be fine.
JIM
We gotta trade the hostage.
Sirens still blare. Jim then notices a window. A small one that they can fit through
JIM
Hey Alex?
JOHN
Yeah?
Jim shoots John in the head killing him. John drops dead
RICKY
What the fuck was that?
JIM
I got a plan. Let’s go through the window. Right up there.
Jim grabs a folding chair and puts it by the window. He smashes it and begins to crawl through. He’s barely able to squeeze through. Cutting himself along the way. He turns around to look at Ricky
RICKY
What about the hostage?
JIM
You know the mission.
Ricky looks at the hostage. Bag still over his head
RICKY
Sorry.
HOSTAGE
Wait, no!
Ricky shoots the hostage in the head. Ricky then wipes his gun clean of prints and puts it in Alex’s hands. He then climbs through the window. Sirens can be heard blaring. They’re in a back alley
JIM
Alright, let’s ditch the gear and get the fuck out of here.
Jim and Ricky start taking off their gear as it cuts to black
FADE IN:
INT. BASEMENT - DAY
Text pops up “1 month later”
We fade in on the same basement Jim, Ricky and Alex were in. This time it’s cleared out almost completely. There’s one man sitting at a table with a rifle. He’s waiting as he hears footsteps above
A man then rushes down the stares with a gun and the man sitting on the table shoots the man in the leg. He falls to the ground and winces in pain. Before he can reload the other two rush down. The man at the table not able to reload goes for his pistol. The other two have guns. The one in front a shotgun and the man in the back a pistol
About the Creator
Cameron Crisamore2
Well I’m gonna be honest. My weak points are romance when it comes to writing. You won’t find much of that here. Horror is also something I struggle with. Everything else though is good.
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