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Double Dragon

this was a response to Michael bays terrible production of TMNT

By Darren BouchardPublished 3 years ago 36 min read
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DOUBLE DRAGON

INT. BILLY LEE APARTMENT

Jimmy Lee. Eyes.

JIMMY LEE

Michael kritchner isnt... S-H-R-E-D-D-E-R!

He launches the coffee table into the air. The t.v. Growls in sync. The table rolls past BILLY LEE making a wtf face- at the syncronization, he's sitting on the couch with his girlfriend MIKA.

The coffee table Smashes into the T.V. Billy looks from where it lands back over too Jimmy.. already with a coat rack in motion against the hall entrance. It shatters in slow pieces. He steps out taking a huge half hook jab that RIPS into the wall, he pulls his fist out...it's in his face, hes really fucking pissed about this. His fist swings out wider, a hook that reveals Billies shocked and increasingly unapproving face at Jimmy regarding his explosive reaction to this casting role, andperhapes some kind of personal vendetta about that dame movie.

His fist rips into the wall. Jimmy turns fist clenched royal viens down the hallway,dropping in momentum for the lifting third foot. He kicks the open hallway mirrored door. The mirror shatters on impact, hes the dooer of his own destruction in the jaded reflection. It slams shut, in what remains of the glass, jimmy's turning with another heavy wall punch. A piece of the mirror breaks off...falling with a silhoute of the scene.

Jimmies Back down the hallway, his left rumbling like a piste smashes into the wall divide. He pounds it left one more good solid time and enters

JIMMY LEE

Who the fuck put that on! Billy? What the fuck!

MIKA

What!? I just wanted to see the movie.

BILLY LEE

Ya, Jimmy would ya quit trashing the places!?

JIMMY LEE

i just get done tellin her how I never want to see that fucking movie! And its like a THING! And I hear something cool out here and i come out and see it's shredder! What the fu-ck Billy?

BILLY LEE

What's the big deal. You said you could use the same moves in roadhouse.

JIMMY LEE

Roadhouse....Billy? No ones gonna give a SHIT about another roadhouse.

He looks at the T.V. A shot of the broken ninja turtle scene. A broken, unshaven falling apart Jimmy. Billy looks at Jimmy and points the remote at the t.v.

BILLY LEE

Ya know..We've bills to pay...

The remote at the t.v. isn't working. Its a shitty apartment around it. This is a shitty life. Nothing glamourous about being the Lee twins.

Some shitty cement wieghts scattered on the floor around the couch where Mika gets up. She has sexy thin Asian ankles. And short shorts.She wears a dirty look, and nudges past Jimmy.

BILLY LEE

And last I checked you weren't helping shit...Jim. You might as well throw it on the lottery.

The broken plasma screen turns off.

JIMMY LEE

Dont start on me with that JIM shit Billy.

He means it walking down the hall to the exit.

BILLY LEE

Your gonna wind up back in the Psych Ward JIMMY!

The exit door slams.

MIKA

you gotta decide.

She peaks up.

MIKA

I'm not living like this anymore.. Its me or him ok?

She turns around...

MIKA

You choose.

BILLY LEE

I can't just leave him Mika, he's my twin brother

He steps into the Hall

MIKA

Your going to have to eventually. What will you stay together for the rest of your life?

BILLY

....

EXT. APRTMENT--EVENING

Jimmy is walking down an iron fire escape step. A Gargage door closed to the right. An apartment upstairs. A black trans am car pulls up front to the left..it's followed by a purple Pintou.

JIMMY LEE

Shit...

He looks up at the closed door.

JIMMY LEE

Ah fuck you Billy (under breath)

He Wipes the blood from his knuckles. A van slows into the scene, parking. Jimmy crosses his arms as more show. Two motorcycles between the trans am and the pintou. The bikers kick the stands. Cut the engines.

The Trans-AM passenger door squeaks open and the gangs main assembler- Chang, gets out.

CHANG

Jimmy...!

He steps up. He's holding a pipe.

CHANG

Just who we're looking for.

Jimmy, with A slight step puts himself into some kind of position between him and the garage door. This could be a fight. He's just getting in a good position.

JIMMY LEE

You must be confused...or lost

HINGE, of the driver door creaks,

IGOR

We ain't losing shit.

a huge fucking biker gets out--Igor. , with a biker's goatee and a thick, heavy chain. He slams the door. A hard ass look. The chain doubles as he takes the corner of the hood.

Chang walks with the pipe. Igor doubles his chain around the trans trunk. Another door opens. The bikers are waiting on their bikes. The van is silent.

Jimmy drops his arms. Loose fists. His mouth always gets him trouble

JIMMY LEE

Come closer.. ill Fucking spin.

Chang takes a few more steps before slowing. He stops and does a page tent with the pipe. Igor and kevin coming up behind the move. He does another super cool page tent move. This guy means fucking business, Fisting the pipe in both hands at a dead stop like that.

Jimmy LEE

The distance is ok. Let's have a nice chat.

Jimmy repostures his arms in a cross.

Chang looks like hes fed some dirty shit. He's done messing around

CHANG

First, you think im gonna let you get away with pushing my little dealers around.....then u got the fuckin nerve to think I'm gonna listen to threats..

He shakes his head,

CHANG

Allots changed in 3 years Jimmy.

He motions and tries to find a smile for Jimmy. The bikers

Pat and Gill, get off their bikes.

CHANG

It aint no intimidation mission.

IGOR

Its a fuck you up mission...

The van doors open. Scott, Dave, Darson and Clark get out.Igors chain rattles on the ground as he lets it down.

IGOR

I get to punch him with this when hes down..

CHANG

Everyone's gonna know how the Lee's turned into nothing but Dragon bitches..

JIMMY LEE

Dragon bitches? What the fuck are you talking about Chang. First you should go talk to a dragon like tmn hat, if you think you're bitches. Me im not...bud

CHANG

We're the Dragons you punk ass!

Chang LUNGES at Jimmy with the pipe. With two hands launching forward, Jimmy dodges back. The Gang is crowding into the fight.

Chang SWINGS the pipe back again, from left to right at Jimmy with one hand. Jimmy steps and taps the pipe ROUNDHOUSE kicking Chang in the face. Igor reels the chain over his head.

Chang wipes his mouth from the ground. BLOOD on his fingers.

CHANG

That's... Blood...

The chain SMASHES JIMMY in the head and knocks him down to a hand. But its just chain in the head. Strike one. It whips around, Jimmy Ducks it, it comes whipping back around and he lifts his leg jumping back to avoid it, the chain sparks off the dry cement, it comes back around and Jimmy veering around towards the GARAGE DOOR, just missing and then Jimmy crouches and wraps his forearm up into it. The chain winds around his foream tightening. He PULLS. Igor unreels him around and SMASHES him into the garage door.

The gang is starting to surround him. Chang is back up and SLAPS his pipe.

CHANG

Fucking business.

Igor grabs Jimmy by the collar hes bleeding from a gash in the forehead and is lifted up and SMASHED into the GARAGE DOOR twice, then Igor wraps and punches him right in the fucking face with the chain in his hand and knocks him down.

Igor picks him back up and throws him into the garage. The gang stands around and watches. Igor takes another swing, Jimmy dodges it. The door rattles to igors massive fist and the CRASHING chain. Jimmy's mouth is bloodied..he spits.

Chang reefs the PIPE for Jimmy's ribs. Jimmy tries to roll off and takes it in the arm it sends him towards the garage

His face is all Bloodied.

JIMMY LEE

This was for a Rat..

Jimmy says following through into a double footed forward round house kick into Chang. He steps back creating distance and looks at igor.

JIMMY LEE

What you want B-b-b-Bop?

(He's really pissed about that ninja turtle movie) He launches at IGOR with solid jabs into his jaw. The third big on the FACE. But, Igor can take a beating. He swings the chain wildly still getting hit, Jimmy jabs quick and gets smashed in the face back. He dodges kyle coming at him, REVERSE KICKS kevin in the gut and ROUND HOUSE kicks Cody around the FACE and finishes backwards on Kyles knee.

INT. BILLIES

JIMMY(OFF SCENE)

And Rocksteady!

SOUND OFF SCENE

CRASH! Crash!

BILLY

What the hell is going on out there?

MIKA

Jimmy is being Jimmy Billy.

Jimmy has Clark by the head and smashes his face against the door. He punches him in the face and knocks him down. Igor swings the chain it knocks Jimmy in the back of head good.

JIMMY LEE

Ah, you fuckin pussies.

Jimmy is hurt but doesn't let on. He launches in the air to kick Igpr in the throat. The chain smashes into Jimmys side and wraps around his ribs.

A fist cracks into the back of jimmies head. Kevin. Punches him again he turns swinging..Igor grabs him and smashes him into the garage...

INT. APARTMENT

The sound of SMASH SMASH of the garage getting pounded is becoming more lively. Mika shakes her head peeking out from the window.

Billy's watching...TM n fucking T, thinking about his bro.

Billy Lee

Maybe he's got to go...

MIKA

I'm going to call police if he's doing that destruction down there...

BILLY LEE

I'll, go and...see if i get a response..

EXT. STREET, CLOUDY

Jimmy's on the ground surrounded getting kicked in the face by the bikers. Chang's back up with his metal pipe.

CHANG

Hold him still...I'm gonna break HIS fuckin leg..

INT. DOOR

A lowly dealer opens it up to an angry;

JIMMY LEE

Break a leg!

Jimmy wastes no time and kicks the thug drug dealer, with a bandana and a card in it around his head, in the leg, and breaks it on contact sending him down. Jimmy enters.

JIMMY LEE

Wheres all that dope money you got for chang BITCH!

DEALER

It's in the shoe box. Dont hurt me Jimmy.

He picks up the shoe box from the coffee table. He pulls money out of it and heads towards the door.

JIMMY LEE

If you tell Chang i gonna break your other leg.

CUT-TO:

EXT. APARTMENT

Billy's chest sticks out exiting the apartment. Billy opens the door onto thefire escape..

MIKA

Don't get in a fight...I can't stand it when you guys do that.

EXT. APARTMENT---RAIN

Billy is on the ground now..getting kicked in the ribs by bikers. (I know, its confusing, but it will all tie together.)

Jimmies up, behind Billy off in the background. His face bloodied in the rain.

Igors swinging the chain over his head like a whip. Changs rasing the

pipe with two hands trying to corner JIMMY LEE off

JIMMY LEE

fuck.....

Billy takes another kick in the ribs. One in the face.The rain is beating down on Igor lurching the chain forward, Jimmy ducks it. It comes back around low, Jimmy lifts his leg and takes it across the shin in the wet rain, grabs Igor pulls it, jimmy freed, Chang launches with the pipe, Jimmy swings hard and slams him down, Igor reeves the chain in the air, launches into the air with it towards Igor-Billy taking a kick in the face in the background.

Cut to.

INT. HOSPITAL

Coagulated, Bloody nostrils.

Billies. His lip is cut and fat. He has stitches on his eye-brow. Dried blood in his nostrils

Jimmy's eyebrow is split open. A fat cut lip too lip. His eyes starting to bruise. His forehead stitched.

JIMMY LEE

....

BILLY LEE

No. I brought the rain.

EXT. APRTMENT--CLOUDY

Billy's not impressed on the fire escape exit. The cloudy sky. Jimmy taking free kicks in the ribs from the ground. A bunch of pathetic fucks.

Chang raises his pipe. He smacks it on the he ground. The sky groans with a roar of thunder. Like Billy too had brought something to life in his fluke occurances. Like what happened to Jimmy when the movie growled to his anger. It's magical.

He launches off the steps as the thunder growls grabbing Devon by the head and levels his knee right into his fucking face insanely and lands and grabs him by the hair and Throws him at the other bikers. (The famous move)

His body knocks into Chang and Igor.

BILLY LEE

You fuck with one Lee, you get BOTH!

He punches Cody HARD in the mouth.

Igors got that sweet chain doubled and after he gets knocked swings it at Billy. It smashes him im the eye brow. He falls to the ground. Igor swings again. Billy rolls. It smacks heavily into the concrete. He swings again ..it thuds.

JIMMY LEE

Ahh!

Billies lunges up and grabs another biker by the hair, running towards the garage, Jimmy trying to bring Igor down to the ground with him by the shirt punching him in the face.

Billies still got the biker by the hair. Chang's towards him with his pipe raised towards his back. Coward. The bikers face petrified his locks of hair in billys tight fists and massive arms. Billies in control towards the garage to smash his face against.

INT. APARTMENT

(Garage crash)

MIKA

...

EXT. APRTMENT--DUSK AND RAIN

Igor's ROLLING to the ground off Jason, getting up, while

another biker pounds JIMMY in the ribs sending him back

further. He swings a third time, a crazy hay maker left smacking Roth right in the jaw. Over Jason's shoulder Chang's pipe comes down on billies back sending him downwards. The bikers swarming him.

INT. HOSPITAL

BILLY

No, i got hit in the back with a

fucking pipe Jim.

JIMMY

Holy fuck BILL. Look at my fucking face man.

BILLY

Well, you started this shit when you robbed that kid. ANd i took a fucking pipe in the back!

EXT. STREET FIGHT- RAIN

Jimmy's launching through the air. His kick comes down on Igor's knee. The giant falls again/

INT. HOSPITAL

BILLY LEE

And i got the fuck back up to help you.

EXT. APRTMENT--EVENING--RAIN

Jimmy's foot comes down on the back of Igor's leg. Billies taking kicks in the ribs. Chang raises the pipe. Jimmy hooks around it with his acrobatic kick(s) smacking Chang in the face on his swing.

Jimmy runs towards Billy. Billy's got one guy by the leg--on stand up, he kicks his other leg out and reefs him by the legs up into the air, onto his back on the rain splattering street. Jimmy flies into the scene with anair born spinning roundhouse kick into kyles face. He lands, and pivots and roundhouses another.

Billies got one backing up. His heavy fist hooking into his jaw. He pounds him three times sending him down.

Igor's getting. Fucking Giant. He swings his chain up over his head again and Chang has risen with his pipe.

A crack of lightening throngs the sky..and the fight reeceds to blackness.

Jayson Lee AND BILLY LEE

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BLACKNESS

INT. PUBLIC TRANSIT

Billy and Jimmy are beat up but cleaned up slightly. An old lady looks back ike their degenerates. Jimmy is. Billy not so much,

JIMMY LEE

Fuckin face hurts when you get hit allot of times lady.

Billy shakes his head and sighs

JIMMY

What! You wanna make out like i never helped you out?

INT. BAR

The bar is loud and filled with a ruff looking crowd. Jasons at the bar talking to a hot blond punk chick. Billy interrupts.

BILLY LEE

Jimmy!

He bumps him. Jimmy's drunk. And looks over dazed.

JIMMY LEE

What billy..

BILLY LEE

Abobo..

JIMMY LEE

Abobo..? fuck..

BILLY LEE

ya...

JIMMY LEE

I'll....

Jimmy looks over billy's shoulder and sees the six foot eight giant across the bar. His big dark hand slams the table angrily.

JIMMY LEE

Abobo..(slightly funy) Oh shit..aha..

Abodo looks up. Jimmy's laughing. BILLY looks behind him.

Abodo's looks and sees BIlly gving him a threatining grin.

ABOBO

Billy..

He's picking up a pool cue. His posie forms with him as he crosses the bar.

Jimmy steps forward and crosses his arms.

JIMMY LEE

What you do want? A BOZO.

ABOBO

What did you call me?

Abodo holds the pool cue from the table in both hands.

JIMMY LEE

Are you really gonna play the what did you call me game when i know you know i just took Abodo and called you A Bozo?

BILLY LEE

Ya you fucking bozo. You fuck with one of us, you get two of us...

Abobo reeves the cue at JIMMY. It breaks against his arm. A

piece flies off. Jimmy knocks into the table. Abobo grabs it and throws it with Jimmy against the wall. Jimmy is hardly phased and leaps ito a round house kicks. (if you havent notice, Jimmy is really good with his feet, and pretty good with his hands, but billy is better with his hands and not so much the feet but not bad)

INT. PUBLIC TRANSIT

BILLY LEE

Oh whatever...

Jimmy shakes his head..

INT. BAR

Jimmy's foot smashes into Abobo. A bar fight is now breaking out. (These guys get i a lot of shit)

BILLY grabs a stool and turns smashing one in the face, then catches a knife in the legs. He twists the stool and throws grabd the guy buy the hair and sends the two right over the bar.

Everyone in the bar starts getting up..

Jimmy kicks Abodo in the leg and gets him on the table by The pool cues.

Two cronies are after Billy. He knuckles up blocking ...left one ... blocks then right one. Then punches the right one shimmying around..

Billy turns and punches a bottle throw in the air at him dodging another on, then Jimmy kicks one.

F----

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INT. PUBLIC TRANSIT

JIMMY LEE

So where am i supposed to go?

BILLY LEE

I dont know Jim. I cant keep doing

this.

JIMMY LEE

Doing What?

BILLY LEE

This...

Jimmy Lee looks at his brother for a second. He gets up and

steps over him into the aisle.

JIMMY LEE

You know what Billy? Fuck you..

He turns and walks down the aisle a few steps before

turning back.

JIMMY LEE

You're lucky I dont punch you out. Billy! Your always on my back like that..

He turns and carries up the aisle.

BILLY LEE

Punchin people out aint Fixin nothing Jimmy! Havent you learned that yet?

Jimmy turns and looks back in the aisle. Theres anger rooted, other then writing, fighting is the only thing this kids got, but Billy just berated it from him. He might be right. Jimmy turns back up the aisle.

JIMMY LEE

Stop the bus!

BUS DRIVER

Your gonna have to wait, this aint a

Jimmy grabs him by the cuff of the shoulder before he can finish

JIMMY LEE

I said stop the fucking bus!

The bus stops. The door squeaks open. Jimmy gets off, the door swooshes behind him and the bus drives off. Billy crosses the aisle and opens the window.

EXT. STREET, NIGHT

Jimmy's walking alongside the bus. Billy's face is up to the open glass driving past.

BILLY LEE

You gonna at least get your stuff?

Jimmy lee throws his finger up in the air, not even

looking. The bus driving off...

JIMMY LEE

Why dont you just throw it in the

street...

He spits into the lane and wipes his mouth.

INT. PUBLIC TRANSIT

Billy Lee sits down. His eyes look over the seats. He nods

his head like he would thinking, this is life.

EXT. STREET, NIGHT

Jimmy is walking in an unknown city. A small group pf girls

across the street giggle as he passes. Hes too damaged, too

much surface anger to shack from a lure. There's nothing

hear for him. Just an unknown city. A dog barking off in

the night.

INT. PUBLIC TRANSIT

Billy stares over the seats. Out the front bus window. Traffick. A red truck. A van green. Dampened in the settled darkness. Billies reflection against the side glass.

EXT. SIDE STREET

The dog scowls from a chain through a chain link fence.

DOG

Woof, woof, woof, woof.

Jimmy stops.

JIMMY LEE

What... are you some kind of real life metaphor. fucking crazy dog.

The dog . The food dishes scratched over.

Jimmy crouches infront of the fence.

JIMMY LEE

... this world beaten you too huh?.

He sticks his fingers in the fence link, the dog wines and

licks his hands. A door creaks from behind it. A bald man with a greasy wife beater hangs out.

DOG OWNER

Hey buddy! Get the fuck away from my animal.

Jimmy Lee looks up. He stands crossing his arms very

briefly.

JIMMY LEE

How about you give him some respect before i go up there and beat your fuckin head off the wall?

DOG OWNER

Oh, you like makin threats huh? That's it, im calling the cops on you buddy!

The door SLAMS closed.

JIMMY LEE

Cops on me. I guess its time to beat it bud.

He grabs onto the fence with both hands.

JIMMY LEE

If you want to fucking bite him...

The dog stares up. Like its jimmy. Like bitings maybe not

the best idea. The fence RATTLES, as he shakes loose from

the anger of his real life metaphor.

The dog starts to bark.

JIMMY

Don't bite him, He'll fucking kill you.

EXT. STREET, NIGHT

Billy gets off the bus. The Dogs bark heard in the distance

EXT. STREET NIGHT

Jimmy walks off.

The dog whines one final bark.

INT. BILLIES

Mikas doing dishes. The door. The dishes. The quietness of the apt. The Door.

EXT. STREET, NIGHT

Face of JIMMY. He's beat to hell. The last thing he needs is cops...or another fight or something stupid like that

INT. BILLIES

Mika. Door. Someones about to be kidnapped, it Opens.

Suspense

Mika looks...its Billy.

Hes beat to fuck too.

BILLY LEE

Hey babe.

MIKA

Holy shit Billy. Look at yor face. I'm not happy about this.

EXT. PARK NIGHT

Jimmy walks down a path. A group of ruffians approach. Yup thats right.

INT. BILLIES

MIKA

Where's Jimmy?

BILLY

We got in a fight. I kicked him out. I dont know.

EXT. PARK NIGHT

Jimmies walking off the path. The ruffians approach..

INT. APT

BILLY LEE

He'll be alright..

EXT. PARK NIGHT

I mentioned Jimmys face is fucked up. Your going to need a lot of make mup for this movie. They bump him into him. Into Jimmy Lee. His face is soar. He just keeps walking. But hes pissed. And when Jimmy gets pissed, he can be very dangerous.

THUG

Hey buddy, you got a problem?

Jimmy turns..

JIMMY LEE

HA! Me? No. I solved it about five minutes ago with a dog..

THUG

Looks like someome solved your face MR. Potato..

INT. BILLIES

Mika sexes her arm around billy's shoulder

MIKA

Not just your face? You take a good beating

BILLY LEE

Ya. I did. Im just glad its all over..you were right about Jimmy. He cant stay here.

EXT. EVENING

THUG 2

I like those shoes. I say we rob this beat up MUTT.

He pulls out his switch blade. He moves toward Jimmy Lee with it

INT. APARTMENT

They kiss.

BILLY

Ah shit. I never thought kissing you would hurt.

EXT. PARK

Jimmy has him by the wrist. He holds on. He kicks one. He

kicks another one. He turns kicks one. He kicks out the

knifers leg and swooshes him down. He twists. He drops the

knife. Jimmy turns and catches a fist in..

INT. BILLIES

She pulls Billies shirt off. Her nails across his back..

MIKA

Now you have to take on me fighter..

She taps him across the face..

BILLY LEE

Ah.. ha, It might be hard considering...

He wraps his arms around her butt and lifts her against the wall.

BILLY LEE

Ive only ever lost against Jimmy..

MIKA

Dont talk about your brother when we do this.. I dont like him. Dont bring him up when we do this.

She kisses him again

MIKA

I hate that..

She flops down pulling Billy (cradling her) down with her.

EXT. PARK

Jimmy steps back...he Slaps a punch right. Spins left and Back hands a fist. Then Crecent kicks into the crowd. He squares off with one to the right clearing his back. Hesmashes him in the face three times while another passes to kick Jimmy. He falls. Jimmy Grabs the new guys foot and sheefts him up into the air. , kicks to the side, jump rolls around. Turns forward and kicks, and power swings punches over one. swinging and reverse mid air back kicks

He punches the knifer in the face looking for the knife on the ground, once, twice...He takes a punch in the head and backs off.. (There only hit)

He feels his head..

JIMMY LEE

You split my stitches!

He launches forward-roundhouse kicking over ones arm punching. He grabs a fist. Slaps a fist. Turn kicks the knifer in the face. Kicks the kick of a kicker. Ducks a punch. Grabs him by the back of the head, the clothes lines him

JIMMY LEE

You fuck with me!

There all down. One runs..He kicks the knifer in the face again. Blood dripping down his face. Jimmy grabs at his feet. The knifer squirms as Jimmy takes off his shoes.

There all running away.

JIMMY LEE

Don't want em anymore boys!! I got two pairs now!

Jimmy throws the shoes at the knifer as he runs.

EXT. STREET SUNRISE

The shoes hang from there laces from a wire.

INT. BILLIES

Mika and Billy are comfortable in bed. The alarm rings. Billy. His face is fucked both eyes swollen and darkened in a different variety of purple black and green.

Billy

I feel like im hung over. I wonder where Jimmy is.

Mika

I dont want to see him for a while.

EXT. PARK STREET

Jimmies on a park bench, a news paper tented over his face. Front page reads crime surge.

INT. BILLIES

The fridge opens. Contents are a scarcity.

Eggs crack and sizzle on a frying pan.

INT. SOUP KITCHEN

Jimmies standing in line. His turn arrives. A scoop of slop plops unappetizingly into a bowel. Two square pieces of stale toast drop on the tray . A small plastic juice container.

INT. VAN

The occupants are all wearing ski masks..

TOAD

Shouldnt we be worried about retaliating in broad daylight?

DEEK

No...

GED

Retaliating in broad daylight is the best time to retaliate. You blitz em like cops when they least expect it.

KEVIN

And they know you mean fucking business..

He pulls out a HUNTING KNIFE.

EXT. BILLIES

Mika isnt put together. Shes looking across the table.

BILLY LEE

Look, i made breakfast happy for you.

The eggs and toast and bacon are placed like a happy face.

He sets a plate down in front of Mika. He goes to the counter for his takes it and he sits

MIKA

I dont want you to hate your brother.

BILLY LEE

I dont. Im happy. He takes a bite

MIKA

......

BILLY

I think this is the best thing for him.

INT. SOUP KITCHEN

OLD MAN

Can i have your crusts?

An old man is half across the table with his face practically in Jimmy's food. Jimmys crusts are chewed off and thrown like scraps on the side of his tray..

His face is bruised and speaks a beaten silence.

INT. BILLIES

BILLY LEE

The best thing for all for all of us.

MIKA

We dont need Jimmy around here. He does nothing for us.

INT. SOUP KITCHEN

Jimmy stares across at the old man. And takes a spoonfull

of greul. He slides the tray forward and stands up.

OLD MAN

Ah thanks. I noticed you dont like em...I save em for later.

The old man takes out an old wrinkled bag..

INT VAN

TOAD

We aint gonna loose this time.

JAKE

We didnt lose last time. We just

regrouped cause of the weather. Last time i checked, im still here breathing.

TRAY

Igor and Chang are pretty messed up. He said we just go in there and smash it up, leave our mark.

TOAD

What about the girl? We carving her up too?

The van pulls up to Billies.

TRAY

I dont care. Fuck the girl.

INT. BILLIES

Mika looks across at Billy. He stands.

MIKA

It's Jimmy that needs you.

BILLY

I know babe.

EXT. STREET

Jimmies walking..he doesnt need anybody. Maybe he does..

JIMMY

ah fuck them.

EXT. BILLIES--MORNING

The van doors open. They all have weapons. Cody has a

sludge hammer. Kevin has a knife. Deek has a monkey

wrench. Ged a baseball bat.

The pintou pulls up. Its full with, Mike, Bates, Jayson and Ryan.

INT. BILLIES

BILLY

Im gonna take a shower.

He goes down the hall into his room. Mika stacks her plate on his. And puts them in the sink. She Takes a water jug and fills it with water. Billy is shirtless in his room going through a pile of dirty clothes. He finds a blue shirt. He inspects it. It seems not too bad...

Mika waters the plant. She turns and hears footsteps walking up the metal of the staircase...

She looks at the door..

MIKA

Billy...

A second then the door smashes open.

Billy hears it smash open and slam into the wall. Mika

drops the jug. Billy looks pisssed pulling his shirt over his shoulders into the hall.

BILLY

JIM! grab your shit and get out!

Billy sees the jug splash onto the floor and a masked intruder bardge into Mika. Billys quick, running down the hall. He jumps into the air and kicks Cody in the side of the head. It sends him crashing as Billy grabs onto the wall divide for leverage smashing the next in the throat withhis foot. Sending him back towards the door and his friends.

Billy is pissed. He grabs Tray from behind pushing Mika and throws him face first into the broken t.v. And wall. Billy turns..

BILLY LEE

You bring this shit to my house..

Kevin attacks him with the hunting knife. Billy grabs it. Twists and pops his elbow out of joint then punches him in the face with his own broken arm, grabs him from the back of the head and knee drives him.

Deek comes stepping over with the monkey wrench. Billy catches it at their fist. He jabs him in the noes right. Then power hooks right knocking him back and down and kicks him in the face. (Fuck this is violent, it would make a great movie)

Tray is gathering himself from the t.v.Toad swings the splitting maul downwards. Billy dodges it right, spins left with a right elbow into codies face, a right elbow into codies face, he takes the maul and swings it up round house kicking cody the other way swinging the maul up around and over his head, mika dives on the couch He reeves it around towards tray ducking out of the way.

BILLY LEE

Break this...

It comes back around the other way and smashes into Deeks knee. It comes back up and takes bates in the chin. The monkey wrench comes down on it. A baseball bat smashes into billies arm knocking him down the hallway both dropping him the maul.

A cricket bat swings, Billy blocks it. It comes back Billy steps out and catches and breaks it simultaneously. The pieces shatter into long splinters.

He grabs for the maul on the floor and gets smashed in the arms with the bat. The bat swings, he ducks, it hits the wall. It swings, he dodges into the kitchen. It smashes into the wall divide.

The bat swimgs down, Billy opens the freezer door. The bat smashes down into it. Frozen juice flies out. He kicks. He closes the door. The bat swings. He ducks. It smashes into the fridge. He opens the fridge smashing him. He reeves open the freezer it smashes into his face. Once. twice. He Closes it. Punches heavy over the fridge door. He grabs him pulls him in, blocking the entrance of the kitchen with the fridge, and starts pounding him, with one fist clenched to his shirt. In face. Once. Twice. Three times. Knocks him back into the wall. A foot kicks the fridge. It smashes into Billy. Condomints rattle. A hunting knife shives through the fridge door. Just missing.Billy steps back and kicks the fridge. Once. It smashesm him. Twice. It smashes him. The knife is pulled out. It sticks back in. It just misses. They try to stab him with the door. Billy steps back and kicks the fridge door as hard as he can. He bumps into him he comes back, Billy grabs his head and pulls him down knees him from behind between the fridge door pulling him onto the fridge. Hes hanging on the fridge Billy smashes his face and he falls between them.

The thugs have swarmed the apartment trashing everything. Billy pushes on the door. It bangs open. A foot into the door pulling the knife.

Billy picks up a kitchen chair Smashing him in the face. The knife is at him. Billy uses the chair legs and steps over the person knocked out and pushes the knew knifer against the wall. The maul comes smashing forward the

handle hitting the wall and the iron into billys chest. His hit back. And swings his fist over the chair at the mauler. He punches the knifer in the face. The maul comes smashing into the chair, breaking the leg buckles to pieces.

Billys on his knees. The chair flies over him down the hallway. Where he's sent next. Hes pushed up against the back wall and smashed halbred style by the bat into the room. He stumbles onto the bed. Takes the cord of a lamp and swings it around. The lamp shatters in ones face. Now it swings around like a jagged shard. It smacks one to the right. It wraps around the monkey wrench smashing one in the face as it wraps. Billy pulls and swings it around at them desperately. He's afriad. The lamp gets smashed with a bat. The monkey wrench flies off.

Billies swooped onto the bed. He rolls. The bat nearly misses his face. . He finds whis way to the floor and gets smashed against the wall face first. He grabs the nightstand and swings it roundly into them. The drawers come out and there knocked back. He throws it across the room at them and it smashes against the wall. He grabs a drawer by the handle. He smashes one. The night table launches back across the room into Billy.

EXT. STREET

Jimmys walking. His fists swollen. His face bruised and blackened. His stitches re opened. He doesn't give a shit. Little even for himself. Life is fucked for him.

INT. BILLIES

The place is being trashed

Mika is about to be rapped. Tray is on her. She's face up. Billies thrown on the bedroom floor. They pick him up and slam him against the wall and choke him with the bat against his throat. He comes too.

DEEK

Where should we put it.

GED

Knifes go in backs...

Mika struggles back on the couch Theres no where left to go, here eyes full of water and fear. They throw him on the floor at the foot of the bed. Ged gets over him with the knife. He struggles.

GED

Hold him still...

Mika's panties drop from the couch onto the floor. She slaps him in the face. He likes it. He pulls her close and something terrible can be witnessed in her face. She just wants it to be over...She's just about to close her eyes, but doesnt because she sees something..

Behind Bates, someone is approaching. And by the sound of their voice...fucking pissed.

JIMMY LEE

The fuck you think!

Suddenly Bates is getting run forward by the hair and gets thrown through the window. He smashes to the ground with broken glass following. Jimmy grabs tray and knees him in the face off of her. Once. Twice. Three times. Four. Five. Six. They fucked with the wrong twins.

Mikas watching the rage and brutality of Jimmy. She's never been so afraid. So happy to see Jimmy. Angry and relieved to see someone beating the living shit out of someone like this. Jimmy. Going, seven eight nine like its not enough until he collapses limp. Tray is knocked unconcious, but that doesnt stop Jimmy from throwing his limp body into the broken T.V.

He says nothing. Just breathing heavily. Furiously. Like he's lost control. His place in time. Where he is. What bullshit just happened and It takes a second to clue in from all that anger. Thats Jimmy alright..

MIKA

Jimmy..

She lunges at him and wraps her arms around him, not caring about her naked side but in view.

BILLY LEE (OFFSCENE)

Ahh...fuck! You bunch of fucking pussies

JIMMY LEE looks down the hall.

Jimmy

Billy...(He growls quielty)

Jimmy reaches into the couch and pulls out a telescopic night stick.

MIKA

Go get them Jimmy.

They're just finished carving DRAGON into Billys rib cage.

Jimmy burst into the room and sees.

JIMMY LEE

Hey! You wanna fuck with the Lees!

He swings the telescopic knight stick. It retracts as he speaks and enters smashing a knee to the left. He jumps wrapping his leg around ones throat and launches him at the wall. He lands on the bed and jumps off kneeing Ged in the face. He lands swinging the knight stick at ones shin. And roundhouse kicks another.

He gets grabbed by the back into a full Nelson, by Nelson. He turns and kicks one in the face while being held.

Billy gets up. He breaks the bed post off. And swings it smashing into Ged.

Jimmy runs up the wall amd lands on other side as Billy smashes nelson in the back, once..twice..jimmy kicks up catching one in the chin and steps up reverse spin kicking him into the wall.

Billy smashes Nelson's head into the wall in the same spot.

JIMMY LEE

Stay the fuck down.

Jimmy kicks ged in the face.

JIMMY LEE

We need to move.

BILLY LEE

Mika..

Billy exits.

Jimmy reaches under the bed. Takes a duffle bag out from under and goes to the dresser. He fills it full of clothes.

They stay on the floor.

GED

You know your fucking with dragons now. Im not threatening u, but theres no where u can go...

JIMMY

You fuck with us again im dishing lethals

GED

Haha. Listen to you. All you had to do was give back the ten grand and take a beating. Now look

Jimmy kicks him in the face.

JIMMY LEE

Shut the fuck up. And Fuck Chang and his biker gang.

EXT. APT

They're hurrying down the steps.

BILLY LEE

Everyones ok right..?

Of course not. Mikas been rapped. Billys beat to fuck and Jimmy,.

JIMMY LEE

Im pretty sure i killed one billy..I was just so mad when i saw

MIKA

Just... don't Jimmy

She's breaking up, almost in tears.

BILLY LEE

All this because you robbed that kid Jimmy.

JIMMY

He was selling crack to high school kids. You needed money.

BILLY

Just..come on, lets go.

They get down the stairs.

Through the window of the van, keys dangle from the ignition.

Billy takes Mika by the hand running infront of the van.

JIMMY LEE

No no no...the van

He opens the passenger door and gets in. Billy pulls Mika.

Mika gets in. The van fires up. Billy gets in. The door shuts.

From the fire escape Ged looks off. Ones holding his arm.

Anothers nose is bloodies to hell. The van screeches off.

GED

These guys are good as dead.

NELSON

Ah..not my van...

The van does a u-turn and peels off. A red flame is scored down the side..Its a cool van.

EXT. VAN GET AWAY

JIMMY LEE

I dont know where to go...

Billy

Just get us the fuck out of here.

The van rips around the first corner SCREECHING onto Huffington Blvd. The engine RIPS next to the tree line dividing the lanes.

EXT. STREET

They're standing around CODY. He's dead. Ged's lifting his

head. They're Surrounded in blood and glass.

TOAD

Is he..?

Ged stands up from checking him.

GED

Bloods coming out his head and ears Toad, what do u think?

Toad checks him...Ged takes out a phone.

ROTH

He threw him out right by the fuckin head man. The guys a nut. Im not sure how things are handled now, but we need to take a gun and put him down. The both of them. And we can use their little girlfriend to make back our money.

GED

It's not the money to Chang. It's the principal.

Ged has a phone.

GED

We're gonna use our two dirty detectives..You all git, ill handle this here.

He dials

LINE

911 emergency...

GED

Id like to report a homicide, and the theft of an automobile...

INT. VAN

Swollen skin torn Knuckles grip the Wheel as the van races down the boulevard. Passing a Gremlin. Then a cop car.

BILLY LEE

Slow down...

JIMMY

We gotta get the fuck out of the city.

The cop car puts on its lights and sirens, and starts on their tail

BILLY

Well congratulations JIM.

JIMMY LEE

Don't start on me with that shit now Billy.

MIKA

Stop for the police. Self defense, we can tell them

JIMMY LEE

There is no self defence when your fucking Jimmy.

BILLY

I heard Chang has crooked cops in the serious crime unit.

MIKA

....

More cop cars join the chase and they race to the city limit excitedly. Maybe a cop car rolls i dont know...this is just a rough first draft intro to the movie pitch

JIMMY LEE

How do we lose them! Fuck!

He smahes the dash. The clock reads 7:56

BILLY LEE

The 8 oclock train jimmy. It's not far...we could make it.

Jimmy LEE

That might work...but we gotta time it perfectly

They race towards the train bridge. Alongside the road they start to pass the train with cops following. The van speeds up to the front of the train

BILLY

Get us ten feet ahead of that train Jimmy.

The clock reads 7:59. Jimmy floors it. The van edges past the train approaching the bridge. Cops in pursuit. They swerve infront of the train and ride the tracks a few seconds before cutting onto the train bridge in the nick of time with the train blasting its horn but alas...they lose the cops. Then they search the van and find a duffle bag full of money.

Thats my pitch. Names can be changed easily to make it original, but i thought a double dragon reboot would be cool, so i drafted the intro for you and submitted into the contest. I can finish it if wanted.

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Darren Bouchard

Ive been writing and wanted to be a writer since I was 12. Ive worked on the craft for so many years and honestly find reading boring, so try and write interesting things. I thought id give this ap a try and what styles get noticed.

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