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Daughter of the Desert Moon

Daughter of the Desert Moon

By ANNA CORALPublished 11 days ago 3 min read
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Once upon a time the desert wind whispered secrets through the gnarled branches of the old mesquite tree. Elara, perched on a lower limb, hugged her shawl tighter, its worn fabric offering scant protection against the chill of the approaching night. Below, the parched earth stretched into an endless expanse, dotted with the silhouettes of cacti reaching skeletal fingers towards the dying sun. Hunger gnawed at her belly, a constant companion these past few days.

Elara wasn't supposed to be alone. Her grandfather, Teodoro, a weathered man with skin like sunbaked leather, always accompanied her on their foraging trips. But this time, a sudden illness had confined him to their makeshift shelter. That's why Elara, despite her fear of the coming darkness, had ventured out, hoping to find something, anything, to sustain them.

As the last sliver of sun dipped below the horizon, a deep purple cloak settled over the land. The stars, usually shy, began to wink one by one, until the entire sky resembled a vast, glittering tapestry. Elara shivered, a tremor that had nothing to do with the night air. The desert at night was a different beast, alive with creatures that rustled in the undergrowth and howled at the pale moon, a moon that was just starting to peek over the distant dunes.

Suddenly, a flicker of movement in the distance caught Elara's eye. A pair of glowing orbs, like miniature suns, darted between the cacti. Fear prickled at her skin. It could be a coyote, but its eyes were too high set. Her heart hammered in her chest as the creature emerged from the shadows - a magnificent sand cat, its fur the color of the desert sand, its movements fluid and silent.

Elara had always been fascinated by these elusive creatures. In her village nestled on the fringes of the desert, stories were told of the sand cats, guardians of the desert night, their eyes said to hold the secrets of the stars. As if sensing her wonder, the sand cat paused, its gaze meeting hers for a fleeting moment before it melted back into the darkness.

Emboldened by the brief encounter, Elara pushed her fear aside and continued her search. The moon, now a luminous pearl in the inky sky, bathed the landscape in its soft, ethereal glow. It cast long, skeletal shadows, and Elara found herself darting from one crevice to another, her eyes scanning the ground.

Then, a glint of silver caught her eye. Tucked beneath the gnarled roots of a desert rose, she spotted a cluster of prickly pear fruits. Relief washed over her. Though not the most appetizing, they were edible and would tide them over until she could find something more substantial.

Carefully, Elara collected the fruits, the thorns pricking her fingers as she did. As she packed them into her basket, she noticed something else glinting in the moonlight – a bone, bleached white by the relentless sun. It wasn't uncommon to find such things in the desert, a testament to the harshness of the environment. But this bone was different. It had a smooth, carved surface, unlike the gnawed remnants left by scavengers.

Elara knelt and picked it up. It was cool to the touch and surprisingly heavy for its size. Tracings of intricate patterns adorned its surface, a language she didn't understand, but one that sent a thrill of excitement through her. This wasn't just a bone; it was an artifact, a whisper of a past civilization swallowed by the desert.

Suddenly, a mournful howl echoed across the dunes, sending shivers down Elara's spine. It was the cry of a lone coyote, and it served as a stark reminder of the dangers that lurked under the cloak of night. With a final glance at the moon, now high in the sky, casting its silvery light on the endless sands, Elara turned and hurried back towards her shelter.

The journey back was shorter, fueled by a sense of accomplishment and the hope she carried within her. The bone, a mysterious gift from the desert night, promised something more than just a temporary respite from hunger. It was a connection, a glimpse into a forgotten world. As she reached the low structure of their shelter, a single teardrop traced its way down her cheek – a tear of fear, of exhaustion, but also of strange hope, born under the watchful gaze of the desert moon.

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