Babs Iverson (Sad, Cold, Monday )
Soft Rock ๐๏ธ๐ถ
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When music ๐ถ moves through to me I try to write ๐ it down, and Transpire Poetry!
Here is a Song I Wrote after reading a Poemโฆ
When I wrote this, I was also Thinking about a Punk Rock Song or maybe Soft Rock, ALTโฆ
Maybe Something for The โFallout Boysโ
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I woke up this morning brushed my teeth and I ate,
Leftover Spaghetti and Ribs for Breakfast-
I Smoked a joint and,
Drank ice-cold Kool-aid โค๏ธ
I'm wondering if I am overlooking something-
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I blundered through the House
(Butting Heads), Bumping ๐ถ๐ธBab Iversonโs
MONDAY, UNHAPPY, SONG TO SING-
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Was it all a waste of time?
The moment, when you blew my mindโฆ
I waited for all eternity to be free-
But You Left Meโฆ
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(It's a sad Cold Monday, I can't wait for Payday!)
Bish merely Mopping around -
Feeling so downโฆ
When you don't have any Moneyyy ๐ต
(It's a sad Cold Monday, I can't wait for
Payday!)
The storms won't be dying down anytime soonโฆ
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I blundered through the House
(Butting Heads), Bumping ๐ถ๐ธBab Iversonโs
MONDAY UNHAPPY SONG TO SING-
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I look out for Floods and weary weather Blogs.
I'm not thinking about,
Leaving the house at allโฆ
I'll snuggle in front of the TV ๐บ with my
PJs, until it gets late โฐโฆ
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My friends are on the way โ๏ธ
They'll have much to say!
We Stay up Too Late โฐ
Weโd be Bumping (Babs, Iverson) - ๐ถMondayโs, Unhappy, Song ๐ต To sing๐ค
Donโt Let It Be a Sad, Cold, Monday ๐ฅน
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This Ballad was inspired by My Friend โBab Iversonโ a Vocal creatorโฅ๏ธ๐ธ๐ฏ๐๐๐
I Read This One line from her Poem and I was inspired to Write This Piece โจ๐๐ฏ๐I will share her Poem ๐โ๏ธThat I Read a While Back โฌ ๏ธ
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Somehow This managed to get Lost in My Drafts 7 months ago but ๐now it must see the light ๐ก
About the Creator
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Comments (13)
Very well written! Excellent work
This was outstanding! One of your best ๐ฅฐ you captured the feeling so well, for e.g. with blundered, blogs, pjโs, donโt let it be xx
Mondays, Tuesdays, any day of the week. Just butting heads with sad songs.
This could be a good Punk song.
Iโm glad it got un-lost! Such a cool thing to do, I wish I could hear it
hope you have very few sad, cold Mondays in the future!
I see this on stage, slam poetry also. let's get you two to do a collaborative story! C'mon! This is good stuff!
Fabulous absolutely fabulous!!! Beautiful song!!! Love this, my friend!!!๐โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
So glad you posted this after being in your drafts for so long! This was amazing!
I like this song. Very bluesy! ๐ ๐ถ
This brings back some nostalgia from the good ol' classic days of rock.
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I like this one a lot! ๐