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An old sage

Wisdom and Gentle Damanur

By AmirS khanPublished 9 months ago 3 min read
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In a distant village nestled among rolling hills, there lived an old sage named Raman. Known for his wisdom and gentle demeanor, Raman was respected by all who knew him. He often spoke about the value of life and the fleeting nature of time.

One day, a young traveler named Kavi arrived in the village. Eager to seek wisdom, Kavi approached Raman and asked, "Great sage, what is the most valuable treasure one can possess?"

Raman looked at Kavi with a warm smile and replied, "The most precious treasure, my young friend, is the breath that sustains us. Just as each breath comes and goes, so does life itself. Cherishing every moment is the key to finding true happiness."

Kavi was intrigued but also puzzled. He said, "But sage, is it not natural to think about the future and make plans?"

Raman nodded, "Indeed, planning for the future is important, but it should not overshadow the beauty of the present. Just as you need to inhale before you exhale, you must inhale the experiences of life deeply before exhaling them into memory."

Kavi spent weeks in the village, learning from Raman and contemplating his words. He witnessed the villagers living in harmony with nature, treasuring simple moments, and finding joy in the smallest of things.

One evening, while sitting atop a hill overlooking the village, Kavi saw a beautiful sunset. As the sun dipped below the horizon, he realized that even the most magnificent moments were ephemeral, just like breaths. He understood that every breath he took was a gift, a chance to experience life's wonders.

Years passed, and Kavi traveled far and wide, sharing the wisdom he had gained from Raman. He became known as the "Sage's Breath" for his teachings on embracing the present moment and valuing each breath as a connection to the universe.

In the end, Kavi returned to the village to visit Raman one last time. The old sage was sitting under a tree, his time on earth nearing its end. Kavi approached him and said, "Dear Raman, your teachings have transformed my life. I have found purpose in each breath, just as you taught me."

Raman smiled, his eyes twinkling. "You have understood the essence of life, my dear Kavi. Just as the breath connects us to life, it also connects us to death. Every exhale is a reminder that life is temporary, yet its beauty lies in that very impermanence."

As Raman took his final breath and exhaled peacefully, Kavi felt a profound sense of gratitude. He realized that in embracing the impermanence of life, one could truly savor every moment, whether joyous or challenging.

And so, Kavi continued to spread the wisdom of the breath, reminding people that every inhale was a gift of life, and every exhale was a gift of surrender. Through Raman's teachings, Kavi showed that by treasuring each breath, one could embrace both the fragility and the eternal essence of existence.

When Raman passed away peacefully, the villagers mourned the loss of their beloved sage. His legacy, however, continued to thrive through the lessons he had taught and the lives he had touched. The village elders, in honor of Raman's wisdom, established a center of learning where young and old alike could gather to discuss ideas, seek guidance, and celebrate the beauty of shared knowledge.

And so, the memory of Raman lived on, not just as a revered sage, but as a symbol of the transformative power of kindness, wisdom, and the profound impact one person can have on an entire community.

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  • Judey Kalchik 9 months ago

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